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I just want to,
Fly, Fly,
Way up high,
Just to meet you.

I just want to,
Feel, Feel,
Love for real,
Just to meet you.

I just want to,
Stay, Stay,
In this way,
Just to meet you.

I just want to,
Share, Share,
All I care,
Just to meet you.

I just want to,
Show, Show,
All I know,
Just to meet you.

I just want to,
hide, hide,
By your side,
Just to meet you.
Am I the first one? I haven't seen any other submissions to the Cooper poem thingy yet....
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euphoria Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2001
quick note to let you know I saw it....=) (Smile)

~ e u p h o r i a ~
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jsenn Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2001
I love the way you created the last verse. That was a good way to finish this poem.
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cooper Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2001
could stuff.... the contest is suppose to start tomorrow... but none the less a nice poem for the first of many i forsee... only one thing i think needs some improvement....

"stay, stay
in this way
Just to meet you.... the in this way seems out of place... but that is ok; because the meaning is still there.. .nice work... just a thought though....

dEaTh SmIlEs At Us AlL...
AlL i CaN dO iS sMiLe BaCk...

@coop@
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