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Sparks and Snowflakes

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Sparks fly,
little moments of heat
that fade with the distance
of space,
a continuum with time;
they flutter and flicker
against my peripheral vision,
and I do wonder
if we are not like this.

Turn off these lights,
and we'll bathe the room
so dark
in candle light,
and play
funny shadow games
against the ceiling,
soft light and
soft touches
as we speak
soft whispers
'neath soft blankets.

And the glow
will dance
across your perception
like warm, incoporeal snowflakes,
and melt along your touch,
never to be felt
but for the lingering cold
(or heat) and the
wet excitement.

Let's light a candle,
and I'll not need heat;
I will settle
for the warmth,
the glow,
the dance,
in this moment with you.

Until we may
again start a fire,
I will be your snowflake,
and you my spark;
I will melt for you,
and you will warm me,
alight upon my shape
and we will extinguish
each other to steam
in this room
so dark.

Shh!
Listen.
I think this piece is fairly self-explanatory, but when I'm in the mood to do so, I will add more in depth commentary.
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Bambushka's avatar
This is beautiful! I love it.

"Until we may
again start a fire,
I will be your snowflake,
and you my spark;
I will melt for you,
and you will warm me,
alight upon my shape
and we will extinguish
each other to steam
in this room
so dark."

This is my favorite part. I love how you intertwine sensual and erotic. beautiful
KarmaGhost's avatar
Physical intimacy bereft of emotional intimacy is pornography. Sensuality and erotica are the only way to go. =)
flesh-cladmonster's avatar
Definitely self-explanatory. It's absolutely beautiful. :+fav: