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UnderWater Love

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Underwater Love

by Smoke City

This must be underwater love
The way I feel it slipping all over me
This must be underwater love
The way I feel it

O que que é esse amor d'água
Deve sentir muito parecido a esse amor

This is it
Underwater love
It is so deep
So beautifully liquid

Esse amor com paixão , ai
Esse amor com paixão, ai que coisa!

After the rain comes sun
After the sun comes rain again
After the rain comes sun
And after the sun comes rain again

This must be underwater love
The way I feel it slipping all over me
This must be underwater love
The way I feel it

O que que é esse amor d'água
Eu sei que eu não quero mais nada

Follow me now
To a place you only dreamt of
Before I came along

When I first saw you
I was deep in clear blue water
The sun was shining
Calling me to come and see you
I touched your soft skin
And you jumped in with your eyes closed
And a smile upon your face

Você vem, você vai
Você vem ê cai
E vem aqui pra cá
Porque eu quero te beijar na sua boca
Que coisa louca
Vem aqui pra cá
Porque eu quero te beijar na sua boca
Ai que boca gostosa

After the rain comes sun
After the sun comes rain again

Cai cai e tudo tudo cai
Tudo cai pra lá e pra cá
Pra lá e pra cá
E vamos nadar
Vamos nadar e tudo tudo dá

This must be underwater love
The way I feel it slipping all over me
This must be underwater love
The way I feel it

Oh oh d'água Underwater
Oh underwater love
This underwater love
This underwater love
Underwater love




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I've always created in my soul,
in my alive and living dreams.
I've a melancholical soul...
i wander away and here.
maybe.
maybe you'll cross my path,
one day, or another.


. w a n d e r i n g s o u l .


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resources :
model : *mjranum-stock : [link] ;
textures : *WanderingSoul-Stox;
sxc.hu for the water, the bubbles etc.
For water, bubbles, textures : i used more than 10 images!


Thanx to all!!!!!!

tools :
Paint Shop Pro + Mouse.


''I give my full permission for =dream-club, ~dreamland-club, *Fantasy-Fellowship, *keepers-of-dreams and all clubs listed in this journal to display this deviation in the club's gallery''.


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whimsi's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The contrast of the darker bits around the bubbles and the extreme whiteness of her legs work very well together. You did very well with the colors, and the almost painted feel most if this photo manip is very attractive.

There are a couple things that jump out in this image.
<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black" />First off, the bubbles in the front look a bit disconnected from the rest of this image. Smaller bubbles that appear closer to her body may look more natural.
<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black" />Secondly, it looks like there is a bit of a strange angle on the lighting. It may just be a bit of surrealism utilized on your part, but the 'expectation' is for light to be coming from above on figures in water, and here it looks like your lighting is coming from lowish on the left... Perhaps rotating this image clockwise would make it appear more natural? If your intent was to create a surreal environment, a few more surrealistic elements to make it more clear couldn't go astray.
KahlaDelahay's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is gorgeous! The colour balance is near perfect and I can see hardly anything wrong with it, but seeing as this is critique, I will do my best to nitpick <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

First thing is that the size of the bubbles in relation to the character is a bit off. I am not sure if this is to create a more "dreamlike" state or what, but it bugs me a bit.

Second is the hair. Surely if she is falling through the water, her hair should be washing behind her?

Otherwise the image is beautiful. As I said, the colours are wonderful and really captures what you intended <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> Nice work and I hope this was helpful! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart" />
karemelancholia's avatar
Thank you dear for the critic.
for the hair someone yet noticed it, read my answer below (the first comment atteh bottom of the page) and you'll get your answer, ya see i can be stupid!
for the dreamy thing, oh yes why not.
i'm gonna give ti a try when i'll rework on the hair that i forgot!

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KahlaDelahay's avatar
Aaaah cigarettes! That is the same thing that distracts me when I am working! I would send you some in the mail but I don't think that's allowed :(

Hope it helped! And just for the record I do adore the image :)
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hehe^^
i've corrected my error, see ;p

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KahlaDelahay's avatar
Wow that looks much better!! J'adore :heart:
NikkiFlinn's avatar
That's awesome! Great job!
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Your club submission is included here:
[link]
:)


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FenneArts's avatar
I like the perspective and colours. Also beautiful job with the lighting. All in all, very soft and nice work :nod:
karemelancholia's avatar

Thanx for your nice comment!
:iconthank--you:

:iconcelticplz: Kare.

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I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS~~
How the girl merge with the water and will turn into bubble.. (or water) the deepest she goes.. @_@ and a bit heart breaking.
The atmosphere is so soft and genuine.
I LIKE IT!
karemelancholia's avatar

Thank you!
you understood it all, all what i wanted to show :heart:

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Thank you!


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Nice! :D I like the underwater feel!
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Thank you!


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