So much detail in the dress! Oh my gosh. I can just imagine how much effort and time you had to have put into this piece and it really does pay off.
I love the way you've combined realism with the stylized manga form. It brings a softness to the image that I think would otherwise be lost on the manga style.
The colors are well balanced with each other.
My only piece of criticism I guess would be that the upper torso on the foreground figure seems a bit too angular to me. It could just be that the left shoulder is a bit too pointed, thus creating a rectangular feel.
It's a very lovely piece. Good luck selling it! Keep up the good work! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart" />