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Underfell - The Ruins redraw by Kaitogirl Underfell - The Ruins redraw by Kaitogirl
Someone on Tumblr challenged me to redraw the first page of the Ruins' Arc!!! So I did! >: D


I feel the improvement!!! >u<


Actual first page here:  Underfell - 1 by Kaitogirl        
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:icondriaz1122:
Driaz1122 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 21, 2017
I can definitely see how much you've improved and changed with your style here Kaito. Thank whoever that tumblr person was for me:). But I honestly have to say that I like your original page more than this one for your comic. The 1st one gave a much less hopeful and vibrant vibe to the world than this one and in the last panel, the light in the original was the clear harsh type of lighting(at least that's how it came off to me) and gave a bit more of a darker vibe to the surface. Here, it has a much more hopeful, almost ethereal, feel to it. There is also the way the rest of the page looks, which is stark and barren, in a way that makes sense for a cave to be, almost cold even whereas this one is warm, welcoming, and the air is full feeling.

I want to make it clear though, I absolutely love how you did this page and the improvement is very evident from the fingers, the strength of the light rays, the texturing of the walls, columns, and plant life on them, to the roughened patches covering Frisk's body. It's amazing and something else to see the results of an individual having gotten so much better!! My first paragraph was me wanting you to know that the stuff you did in the past are things which I enjoy very much, just as I enjoy the stuff you do now. I hope I didn't come off as bashing this wonderful pageSweating a little....
*Edit:fixed some spelling errors
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Oh! I can see your point! The problem here is the light!

Hm, hm, colors and light are very important, so if I want to give off a feel of despair and darkness, I should tone it down and maybe use colder shades and colors. You made an excellent point there!! Thank you ^^
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:icondriaz1122:
Driaz1122 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017
The light is part of it for sure, but there're a couple other parts as well, though I see you already mentioned them:P.

Yep, that would be my assessment. Just a point, I'm not quite sure how one does harsh/crisp lighting, but I think that might be what would work best for despair and darkness, lighting-wise. Just avoid going too edgy though lol:D (Big Grin). I'm glad that I was able to make some good points!
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
hmmm I am not a light and color expert, I didnt take art classes xD But I could try seeing some tu-toriels :3
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:icondriaz1122:
Driaz1122 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017
I haven't taken any classes either lol, mostly learned what I have from giving advice and analyzing pictures others have wanted critique on. Tutorials are a godsend at times though:).
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
indeed your comments are useful ^^ thanks again
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Driaz1122 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017
-squeaks-Meow :3 
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:iconstayambereyes:
Back then things looked a bit more cartoony (is that the right word?) but now, you use more of the effects in the lighting and a bit more realism in the background, making an atmosphere that is both calming but a bit empty.

(If that wasn't what you were going for, sorry. This is just the way that I interpret it and it truly shows difference in your style over the time you have first started drawing the comic.)
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner May 30, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Well, "caling but empty" does the trick <3 <3 thanks for your opinion!
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Machi-Ato Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And if only every page could look like this
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Student Digital Artist
ouch c':
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:iconmachi-ato:
Machi-Ato Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cri
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Student Digital Artist
cri cri 
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:iconmachi-ato:
Machi-Ato Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Screw that, they look awesome already)
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hichigot Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017
good job x3 you have made lot of progress
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I know, isn't it cool ? <3
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:iconhichigot:
hichigot Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017
it's Amazing !!!
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Student Digital Artist
nawww you <3
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EpicPokemon13 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017
Coooooooooooooooooollllllllllll! ^_^
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017  Student Digital Artist
no, you <3
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BrydenrunsXb0x Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017
Oooooooo
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017  Student Digital Artist
~~  :D
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HetaliaLove100 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2017
THE IMPROVEMENT IS REAL!
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017  Student Digital Artist
it is boiiii
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delaas5811 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017
Holy crap you really have gotten better at your art good work
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017  Student Digital Artist
no big surprise, if you just keep drawing this will happen xD
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Nanohanan Featured By Owner Edited Apr 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Wowie! <3
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017  Student Digital Artist
:'D
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Amoop15 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2017
Oh jeez, how long has it been since the first page?
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2017  Student Digital Artist
a year x'D wel, a bit more than a year
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Nojatha Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017
Frisk has fallen... and she can't get up! D :
(You're the best Kaito. please never stop doing what you love. You've improved so much!)
Undertale SOUL - Red 
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017  Student Digital Artist
but they got up lol

thanks <3
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Nanenna Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can definitely see the improvement! Though both versions have their charms.
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I prefer this one for obvious reasons xD
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:iconzephron-drawing:
Wow, the lighting effects are amazing ! '.'

The improvement is real ! Very nice job ^^
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I tried my best <3 thanks
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:iconzephron-drawing:
Zephron-drawing Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017
You're welcome, Kaito ! ;D
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:iconra2a:
Ra2a Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really good!
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Student Digital Artist
naw, thanks <3
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ThePunkKIng Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
I really like the art style. : D
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Student Digital Artist
kfjgksjd thanks <3
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POstudios16 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
wowie, this is so great!
Seems like you progressed.
Flowey Icon - I'M SO DONE WITH THIS KID.- Or not?
UF Sans Icon GIF - shut up, stupid flower, you are not right
Flowey Icon - OK?? - oh no-o, i AM right!
Underfell Sans icon\avatar  - do you wanna have a GOOD time?
Flowey Icon - SLAM. - nope
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Underfell - Wat - i win.
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Student Digital Artist
what is this xD
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:iconvenomquill:
VenomQuill Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Improvement is the greatest! >:D
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Student Digital Artist
<3 it is
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:iconendertimes:
Endertimes Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
Noiiiiiiiiiiiice!
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:iconkaitogirl:
Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Student Digital Artist
naice :D
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MarioAndMiles Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017
Tadaaa
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Kaitogirl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Student Digital Artist
:D !
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BoredLazyGirl Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017
Frisk just fell from heaven...Or they got the sun in their eyes and fell...They do seem like a slightly clumsy people...Also, AWESOME job with the shading! It looks so cool ^-^
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