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Kimiko's story continues. Would now be a good time or a bad time to mention that two of my biggest writing influences are Jun Maeda and Kinoko Nasu? XD

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When She Cries (c) 1992 Beeson/LeMaire/RCA Records. Performed by Kenji Nekotani in the style of Restless Heart
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I really liked the song :nod:
But I thought I'd alter it to rhyme more. Not for anything, I just like songs and thought I'd try and write my version. I hope I didn't change the meaning though!

Here it is...

“she cries, at night

And she doesn’t think I can hear.

She tries, to hide...

Inside,all of her fears.



I pray, this time.

I can be the man that she deserves.

‘Cause I die, a little each time,

When she cries.”

... So is it cool,or lame?