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i dont wanna feel blue by K3NMA i dont wanna feel blue by K3NMA
uh another vent sort of. i like the sketch better :/
marina diamandis on loop + wanting to practice painting + anatomy practice = th IS SHI T

majority of my vents just turn into girls th e fuck,..,.
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PoisonPeas Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi! Hope you don't mind me commenting/critiquing this piece as I'm participating in an event currently held by Project Comment Heart

I like the colours and how you managed to add that space snake to form a unique piece of sh- art :)

I don't want to repeat what the previous artists commented on her anatomy and shading etc. but I think you can try to improve on the background. (lol who am I to judge when I suck at backgrounds too ;w; ) Since there's a space snake hanging onto her body, maybe you can make the background more spaced-themed to give it a more central theme. Or maybe a simple background can do so that the attention is shifted wholly to the girl. 

And I think you can also improve on her face too: Gap between eyes should be bigger, eyelashes should be thinner etc. (But it all depends on personal preference and style, so I can't say much Sweating a little... I don't wanna nitpick or anything, but the line art on this can also be smoother :D)

((Sorry if I said anything that offended you or anything. You're a fantastic digital artist btw)) 

Be sure to keep up the awesome work and have a niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee day~ >w< 

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K3NMA Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Student Digital Artist
thank you its no problem at all its really appreciated ovo
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winepire Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think you did a great job at capturing her likeness, and I'm in love with all the colors here! That space snake looks awesome too. I think the sketchy/painterly look works for this piece, except in the thigh, where it looks a bit like it's distorted to curve in an unnatural way. Personally, I think the hair could use more detail so that it matches with the level of detail (the body, clothes and hair all have outlines) throughout the rest of this piece. Those things are just minor though, this piece looks amazing either way!
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astral-berry Featured By Owner Edited Dec 5, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CommentI love the composition of the artwork, and the overall feel of it (dayum look at that space snake!!) Your character looks hella interesting and fun. Your ability to use colours is great. Now the room for improvement part -- *drum rolls* you already knew it, but anatomy. I learned this super useful trick that you can use when you are lazy to study all those skeletons and muscle figures (ugh). Just flip (horizontally) the work in progress frequently – It works wonders! You will be able to uncover some mistakes and fix them. Also it’s easy to get used to! Other than that adding shading (even as simple as cell shading) will add so much depth and personality to your artworks. Keep up the amazing work! 
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K3NMA Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the awesome critique! Haha yeah i know i need way more practice with anatomy so im not surprised to hear abt that much ;w; I will try to get into it more though and take your advice on the shading!
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astral-berry Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem! We artists should all help one another! Llama Emoji-48 (I'm Cool with Mah Sunglasses) [V2] 
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Jennyliino Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2017  Student General Artist
ooh!!!nice!
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MysonTheBlueIllusion Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute.
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XxPaigeexX Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS IS SO GOOD WHY DIDN'T U SHOW ME SOONER. ALSO THAT HAND IS FANTASTIC. A+++
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K3NMA Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2017  Student Digital Artist
aH THAN KS
i feel like the hand is alright though ;o;
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XxPaigeexX Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that hand is fantastic and i will FITE U also i really love the hair and ur coloring is always on point.
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K3NMA Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2017  Student Digital Artist
:'0 Heart 
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XxPaigeexX Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heart Heart Heart 
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MissMosquitete Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I kinda like her :D She looks really beautiful in her own way! And your style looks amazing on its own :D
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K3NMA Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2017  Student Digital Artist
thank you that really helps ;w;
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MissMosquitete Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are very welcome and I am glad that it helps :heart:
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