I love your comic sososososo much!!!! It’s adorable and heartbreaking; I shed real tears!! Real ones!!!!!! I’m actually doing a X nuzlocke as well! Fennekin was my starter too. I named him Firefox lol. But my current favorite is my, now Spewpa, Skytter. She’s my favorite bug type actually and maybe you could put a Spewpa or Scatterbug in as a bg character just walking abt? It’s super super okay if u don’t want to!!! But I just really love your art and want to see my girl in gijinka form... Don’t feel pressured or anything, I’m really okay I you don’t want to. But if you’d like that’d be nice... 👉🏻👈🏻
JUST FOUND THIS COMIC, JUST BINGED IT, IVE BEEN CRYING NON STOP SINCE ULRICH, YOU WRITE SO VERY WELL I HOPE TO ACHIEVE SOME LEVEL OF YOUR EMOTION IN MY NUZLOCKE COMIC BUT MY GOD MY HEART HURTS SO MUCH
im so torn apart that they never found rho's family. ;-;
at least the team seems to be getting closer. they need each other ;^; <3
also, Edie with her hair down... she has always been very pretty but DAMN she's gorgeous with her hair down!
And Rho burns away...
The thing that really strikes me is that they couldn't find his family. It's difficult to remember exactly how Rho ended up on the team.. One day he was just kind of there. And in the time he was with us, we learned almost nothing about him. Who was he? Where did he come from? Who were his friends, his family? Did he have any at all? Is there anyone out there who's missing him?
We'll never know. That knowledge burned away, with him.
im so happy to see this softer side of edie, and i cant wait to see how her relationship w/ rowan is gonna change & evolve through the next pages
also!! the emotional impact you convey through each panel, especially with that fire, is so fucking impressive. i think this might be my fave page so far
Lots of people say "well it beats a red hot poker in the eye" when they have overall shitty birthdays but i am not entirely convinced Roman would not prefer a red hot poker to the eye than fucking this.
edie is GORGEOUS with her hair down. ugh that panel where she looks back while talking about the only ones who travel with them are fighters... holy shit. she is beautiful and her EXPRESSION like... made me stop for a moment. UGH. that subtle sadness there... love that panel so MUCH. god this page is just... masterful, the mood, the lighting, the coloring... ugh. everything. the conversaiton that went down here and roman fdkjueijd I CANT EVEN SPEAK this is so good, peak PEAK resolution. you are a MASTER storyteller, i cant even words
Also, I've said it before, and I'll say it again, the amount of work you put into this is STUNNING! I especially like the fire, it's so satisfying to look at 😍
Christ Snooze, your writing is fantastic. Edie is quickly becoming my favorite character (which is funny because the Bulbasaur is one of my favorite lines). I really hope Edie learns how to open up a little bit after this :sob:
So much to go over here! I love how much thought you've put into this world, and how the battle licensing works.
The EMOTION in this is so amazing, and your colour shifts really help to show that. How heartbreaking it must be for them to realize they were apparently the closest thing Rho had to a family... that nobody else cared to show. Damn.
That bouquet is so cool. So well thought out, so epic. And poor Roman, doesn't wanna get abandoned by his buddies, despite the (really entirely fair) declaration that only battlers are allowed.