All right, this is the last chapter of this fanmake so here we go; Time for more suggestions (minus one when I realize that it may not make sense if I used it) and such to be used like mad, with another fanmake at the end to be announced.
Chapter 13: To Kill A Rat
"RUN FOR IT, BOYS!" Basil shouted, as he jumped off to run with Hoagie & Stitch behind him away from this evil Toon Madman- or Mad-Rat.
" Suddenly, Ratigan had spurned the robotic feet with gold TOON springs that leaped him across the factory, as if springing into action! "Briingh-brrriigh
" His face expression unchanged as he comes to the fleeing detectives, grabs Basil in one hand, Hoagie in the other, and pounce Stitch on his spring shoes!
uugh," Basil tried to fight back, but the NEW Ratigan prove too strong when he had a bear grip with him with Hoagie after he turn them around from leaving!
"Uuugh; what is this, this can't REALLY be Ratigan's STRENGTH,