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So I have started writing a story a couple of weeks ago, and while I think it is fine, I would still like some input from others, like what they think as well as things I can do to better my own writing. Here is the first chapter of my story, something I like to call, "Talons Fall" For those of you who take the time to read this, I hope you enjoy it and I look forward to hearing what you have to say. :) It was a quiet summer morning in the small village of Creshire, the wind blowing a cool breeze from the from the north which caused the leaves from the trees to rustle and the grass fields look like a sea of green. The rolling green landsca
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First Chapter
So I have started writing a story a couple of weeks ago, and while I think it is fine, I would still like some input from others, like what they think as well as things I can do to better my own writing. Here is the first chapter of my story, something I like to call, "Talons Fall" For those of you who take the time to read this, I hope you enjoy it and I look forward to hearing what you have to say. :) It was a quiet summer morning in the small village of Creshire, the wind blowing a cool breeze from the from the north which caused the leaves from the trees to rustle and the grass fields look like a sea of green. The rolling green landsca
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LaMuserieHobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the watch !!!

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BuzzyNSparkleProfessional Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch! Peridot thank you sprite
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jokochimaruHobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the watch, I really appreciate that!ヽ(゚∀゚)ノ ヒャハハハ~♪
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thank you so much for the watch :hug: it means a lot to me ^^
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You're quite welcome! I like what I saw on your page and had to give it a watch :)
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Thank you for the watch, I really appreciate that!
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You're quite welcome!