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Ryuko v2.0 by JPL-Animation Ryuko v2.0 by JPL-Animation
Again, another LookDev on Ryuko, and i also experimenting with lighting...
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:iconzephre:
good stuff going on here, I really like the shader's your using on the skin and "clothing" (i know, its a living creature..") . The only thing I would suggest would be take another look at the mouth. I don't know if your using blend
shapes/morphs for the phonemes or what, but the mouth looks a bit off at the lower lip, it appears to be somewhat distorted. Id like to see multiple angles of this model, and would be better to critique that way. I dig the lighting as well, simple and right. Im digging what you doing, keep it up! Well done!
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i7434r7157 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
OH MY GOSH THAT IS EPIC MAN
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lulu-illussions Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I admire the dramatic pose, you drew it very nicely. Also the colours look great and detailed, I can even see cracks on sword´s blade, that´s awesome detail!:D
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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:iconwisky-08:
Wisky-08 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015
lov
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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:iconexcharny:
ExCharny Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Great stuff
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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Stopmotiontk421 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool, I didn't know she wore gloves. 
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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:iconstopmotiontk421:
Stopmotiontk421 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome. :D 
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JBaulmont Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015   General Artist
I think that the mouth can look odd because of the hollow part over the top of the lower lip. But that's just a little detail not very noticeable.
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Filmographer
hollow part ? you mean the inner mouth ?
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:iconjbaulmont:
JBaulmont Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015   General Artist
Hmm yes (sorry maybe I write oddly, english isnt my first language) her lower lip doesn't exactly looks like a crescent.
Am I much clear :? or worse :lol:
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015  Professional Filmographer
crescent ? now im confuse... >.<
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:iconjbaulmont:
JBaulmont Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2015   General Artist
Ok a drawing will be better :)
sta.sh/01842smrz5i8 I've bordered in red the odd part...
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2015  Professional Filmographer
ah i see... okay i get it... :D thank you for the information... :D
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Rapidfyrez Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
The face is a little... offputting. Mostly the mouth.
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Filmographer
the shape isn't right ?
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:iconrapidfyrez:
Rapidfyrez Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
Yeah, with how smooth her skin is it just looks... off.
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:iconzephre:
zephre Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
good stuff going on here,  I really like the shaders your using on the skin.   The only thing I would suggest would be take another look at the mouth.  I don't know if your using blend shapes/morphs for the phonemes or what, but the mouth looks a bit off at the lower lip.  I dig the lighting as well, simple and right.   
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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:iconzephre:
zephre Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
U bet, it's a terrific job, keep it up
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Evejones6 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015
Awesome!!
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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:iconice-swmapert:
Ice-Swmapert Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015
It REAL AMINETION !!!!
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Filmographer
;)
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:iconice-swmapert:
Ice-Swmapert Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
Yrah
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MaddogSamureye Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Student Filmographer
Now THAT looks a little bit better. I guess it's the lighting and the fact that most anime characters are very over-the-top in their expressions. Be sure to over-exaggerate a lot.
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Filmographer
i can make her mouth open more, but it wont be as wide as the anime or else it looked weird... :D :D :D
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:iconelitaonearts:
ElitaOneArts Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome work my friend!
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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:iconelitaonearts:
ElitaOneArts Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Welcome
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Slender6662 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015
AY YO RUBY CHILL (F2u icon)  YOUR ARTS SO FABULOUS TRY DO MAKO PPPPLLLLZZZCrazy Emote 
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Filmographer
but i like Satsuki more... =p
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Slender6662 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
BOTH ARE PERFECT AND FABULOUS
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FlashbackingArtist00 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Omfg she looks amazing!
I think the amount of lighting here, it really fits!
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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FlashbackingArtist00 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're the very most welcome! :heart:
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LillinApocalypse Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Student Digital Artist
she so awesome! i would want to write a critique, but i don't know how much of a struggle it is to create a 3D model....but the only thing i would say is...um....i don't want to sound mean tho, but it's hard to see her eye brows Llama Emoji 33 (Down or Depressed) [V2] maybe if they were a little darker Luffy Anime Emoji (Nose pick) [V5] 
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JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Professional Filmographer
there you go, its fixed... :D
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LillinApocalypse Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Llama Emoji-10 (Shy) [V1] 
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rocio1617182324 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Student General Artist
amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconjpl-animation:
JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Professional Filmographer
thanks... :D
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