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LA Part 7 (ended I am afraid)

Luna Academy.

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My FIM comic project that was a Collaboration with my friend and editor :iconhandyj443: has officially stopped. The decision for this apart from being no updates for months :stuipdme: (and I am going to be honest here). Is because 
my initial intention with the project was to create a big pony comic adventure that could rival other popular ones on DA. The amount of views a MLP comic gets is crazy and I wanted to be a part of that scene. its stupid,but true.

So much has happened with my creative life that I cannot make any time for it. The detailed art alone would take over 8 hours. I have to focus my energy on things that are more worth my time and fuel my passion for creating art and not with the idea of producing art because of popularity. 

however despite it ending I am leaving the pages I did on DA as a showcase of what my comic book style for ponies would look like. 

from now on if I get any ideas that I think are worth telling in comic form I will stick with just one off jokes or small comics.and Still refer to :iconhandyj443: for their writing and editing. 

thank you for all who read and supported the comic and commented on the pages. and I hope you can understand and respect my decision on this matter. 

A BIG BIG thanks to my friend :iconhandyj443: for being my editor and co writer of the series 

credit goes to the one and only :iconblackgryph0n: for the cutie marks used. 

Check out my FIM title card project… i will have a new card done soon :roll:

Until next deviation LATERS Bronies :peace:

drawn and painted in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom Pro in 15 hours

Like it:blowkiss:hate it :police: its up to you not marmite :dummy: 

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xxxMakixxx's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

- Visión: Reflects ok what actually is: a fancomic of mlp, with a drop or your own.
- Originality: is hard to be make a 100% original comic of mlp. With 7 pages far still no original own character (may be in the future will apear). The backgrounds are more or less original (forest, the academy...).
- Technique: color and backgrounds are great (forest. Poniville and academy), expresions are funny and well drawn, the movement is clearly defined (ex. page 5).
- Impact: with only 7 pages is still a bit early to know if it will be a great comic but it could be one of the best mlp fan-made comics.

To improve: Create an original main character, sometimes proportions pony / bulding are not accurate (not to important actually).

To keep: backgrounds / color, flutershy and pinkie expressions and movements (for example, page 3 where pinkie is packing her stuff), the story so far, way of drawing.
42ndchaos's avatar
Dam thats an awsome building.  Quick question I'm working on making a fallout equestria tabletop rpg (a mod for the Dodeca system to be precise) and was wondering if you would mind my using that image as a template for Luna's school for gifted unicorns in Littlehorn Valley.  I had previously imagined it as a more bunker like structure but seeing your Luna Academy has made me realise no school for Luna's pupils could possibly go without some major gothic flair.  
CMC--Scootaloo's avatar
I didn't know you ended this..... That is really sad, the story turned out to be so epic already and the style of the drawings.....
What if someone would commission you to finish it? Would that at least a way for you to continue and finish it?
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Nanorider426's avatar
Nuts. Ended after all. :( (Sad) Clap 
irma75's avatar
don't it ended this comic I want to know what will happen next :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: STITCH LLORA STITCH LLORA STITCH LLORA Frozen - Elsa Crying Icon rainbow cry :crying: rvmp :crying: rvmp Really Sad :crying: rvmp :crying: rvmp :crying: rvmp Cry run Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] 1 Cry run 1 Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] Romano (Cries) [V4] Cry run Romano (Cries) [V4] Sayu Crying Icon Jake crying plz Jake crying plz 
Ghastlydarkworld's avatar
I've just finished reading all of this, and I love it (even if the academy has a certain Minas Morgul feeling XD)

I just can't wait the next page :)
JACK13386's avatar
when the next page
Kartoffelkamm's avatar
can u join the night guard there? or do u become a batpony, like the two who actually should get the letter?
well, i wanna go there, too. :)
Kartoffelkamm's avatar
second panel, Pinkie´s face, errr... :)
ChaoticNote's avatar
I didn't realize this until now, but is this Luna's Honnōji Academy? Damn that's cool.
Kartoffelkamm's avatar
well, at least they arent the 2 members of the mane six to be the most used in... wait, they are. and now they will get outfits inspired by Kill La Kill...

anyway, i just uploaded my first fanfic a few hours ago. u could check it out if u want. its about a shopkeeper with a pretty special secret...
btw, the OC used in this fanfic is not my main OC, but my main OC is already an important part of another story that takes place around the same time, so yeah.
ChaoticNote's avatar
Where are you hosting this fan fic?
Kartoffelkamm's avatar
on my main page as journal entries.
MacyEdward's avatar
When will the next be?
abcdh's avatar
As I was scrolling down this comic, once I got to the last panel, I immediately heard the epic inception brass noise as I scrolled down that frame. It's amazing how much motion can be had from painting style. Awesome work!
samykhadre's avatar
The next is for wen, please ?
KatyScene's avatar
Pinkie looks like Roger Rabbit in that second panel. XD
dragon1ooPP's avatar
Amazing comic! Very nice artwork!
samykhadre's avatar
The next is for wen, please ?
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samykhadre's avatar
The next is for wen, please ?
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