cover art that also highlights the plot . jowybean.deviantart.com/art/Lu…
Introduction to the two OC characters that will play a big role in the comic later on.
A BIG BIG thanks to my friend for being my editor makes the writing side of this comic much easier to handle and less stressful with the grammar.
also credit goes to the one and only for the cutie marks used. Apart from the ones I dsesign for the OCs
Right now the comic does not have a schedule because I already have a lot going on outside of ponies so pages will be done when they are done.
Check out my FIM title card project jowybean.deviantart.com/galler… i will have a new card done soon
Until next deviation LATERS Bronies
drawn and painted in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom Pro in 9 hours
Like ithate it its up to you not marmite
So, your providing an interesting story using the show method of story telling giving a sense of mystery and forcing the reader to want to continue and not be bombarded with text, the art style flows and the use of sounds being drawn into the art adds a sense of fluidness and adds to the immersion, if i look at it for long enough it becomes apparent that some of the backgrounds appear to be reused in panels, but they are so beautiful in there style it doesn't matter, also noting that if I'm correct on the backgrounds being done separately, you have done the very difficult task of layering the characters into the environment so they blend well, however the only thing I criticize is that whilst the characters do blend well with the background the presence of the black lines in the characters does make them stand out a bit more in a way which could reduce the immersion, it doesn't in this case but I had to think of something to criticize otherwise this wouldn't help you at all, good luck with all your future stuff
This strip is so awesome there are no words to describe its beauty.
1.The vision is awe inspiring to the viewer and the Author should be smothered by favs & watches.
2.The originality of the frames fills the viewer with droll for more and more frames.The Author is a dealer of great things that fans beg for more.
3.Technique is deadly and should come with a serious warning to outsiders that are not conditioned for this level of talent from the Author.
4.The impact of the design for Pinkie Pie,Fluttershy,Batterpie and Pixiesly are too deadly cute and incredible in their facial expressions.The viewer really begins to care for what's going on in their lives at this point in time in this grand strip.
For a MLP fan NOT to fav and ad Jowybean to their watch is a serious crime against the MLP fan group,here on DA.
Bravo to the Authro for sharing this,I stand by this critique,if the viewer reads this and thinks me a stalker.<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/m/s…" alt="" title="smilesplz" />