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LA Part 3

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cover art that also highlights the plot :). jowybean.deviantart.com/art/Lu…

Introduction to the two OC characters that will play a big role in the comic later on. :)
 
A BIG BIG thanks to my friend :iconhandyj443: for being my editor :thumbsup: makes the writing side of this comic much easier to handle and less stressful with the grammar. 

also credit goes to the one and only :iconblackgryph0n: for the cutie marks used. Apart from the ones I dsesign for the OCs

Right now the comic does not have a schedule because I already have a lot going on outside of ponies so pages will be done when they are done.

Check out my FIM title card project jowybean.deviantart.com/galler… i will have a new card done soon :roll:

Until next deviation LATERS Bronies :peace:

drawn and painted in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom Pro in 9 hours

Like it:blowkiss:hate it :police: its up to you not marmite :dummy:  

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

So, your providing an interesting story using the show method of story telling giving a sense of mystery and forcing the reader to want to continue and not be bombarded with text, the art style flows and the use of sounds being drawn into the art adds a sense of fluidness and adds to the immersion, if i look at it for long enough it becomes apparent that some of the backgrounds appear to be reused in panels, but they are so beautiful in there style it doesn't matter, also noting that if I'm correct on the backgrounds being done separately, you have done the very difficult task of layering the characters into the environment so they blend well, however the only thing I criticize is that whilst the characters do blend well with the background the presence of the black lines in the characters does make them stand out a bit more in a way which could reduce the immersion, it doesn't in this case but I had to think of something to criticize otherwise this wouldn't help you at all, good luck with all your future stuff
ElementOf-Loyalty's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This strip is so awesome there are no words to describe its beauty.
1.The vision is awe inspiring to the viewer and the Author should be smothered by favs & watches.
2.The originality of the frames fills the viewer with droll for more and more frames.The Author is a dealer of great things that fans beg for more.
3.Technique is deadly and should come with a serious warning to outsiders that are not conditioned for this level of talent from the Author.
4.The impact of the design for Pinkie Pie,Fluttershy,Batterpie and Pixiesly are too deadly cute and incredible in their facial expressions.The viewer really begins to care for what's going on in their lives at this point in time in this grand strip.

For a MLP fan NOT to fav and ad Jowybean to their watch is a serious crime against the MLP fan group,here on DA.
Bravo to the Authro for sharing this,I stand by this critique,if the viewer reads this and thinks me a stalker.<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/m/s…" alt=":iconsmilesplz:" title="smilesplz" />
oh god the mail man messed it up big 
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777's avatar
Was that a parasprite?!
AppleGloom1928's avatar
GIVE ME MORE!!!!! When will the next LA come out?!?!?!?
PonyUniverse's avatar
LOL that pack pack pack panel! :P
little-shining-fox's avatar
Oh boy, this is SO not going to end well.
Milkitalix's avatar
When will the next part will come out?
Animewolfgamer's avatar
lol that is funny.
Wisp-on-Paper's avatar
Ooo, you've drawn a beautiful three strips for this comic thus far. Definite watch! <3
jyroman53's avatar
Next time I'm in a hurry for a vacation I'll call pinkie to make me bags !
ChaosDrgon's avatar
Now THAT is how you pack for a trip!

Also, Batterpie and Pixiesly... really? :icondoublefacepalmplz:
Milkitalix's avatar
Maybe thats why derpy gave them the letter
Pinkiepie-batterpie
Fluttershy-pixiesly
:p
ChaosDrgon's avatar
Well of course it is, that wasn't in question. I was facepalming at how ridiculous the names were because it's obvious that's what (s)he was going for, never mind the fact that (s)he didn't even need to make them so ridiculously similar because postmen don't deliver mail by the name on a letter, but by the address on the letter.
tigreanpony's avatar
Ok this is interesting never guessed it would lead to a school the first and second made little sense but it is funny to say the least. I will keep an eye on this one.
You're rather intense today, Pinkie.
Envirotech's avatar
Bwahaha the zoom out to the two other characters starts to tie this all in nicely.. Also loooove the frantic Hyper Pinkie Pie ^_^ Hehe bwahaha   Great stuff!!! :D
zaiali's avatar
God damn it pinkie. . ..
kabhes's avatar
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Dannykay4561's avatar
Pinkie looks very cartoonish in the first panel.No wait,she looks cartoonish in almost every panel and that's a great thing about this comic series
Also,did Pinkie pack a parasprite?
warlord487's avatar
This is quickly becoming one of the most anticipated series for me. Next part please! :)
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