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The Test

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By JonnySnakeSeven   |   
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Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5

Stock: [link]

School Project | European Contest
This is a poster for a campaign for prevention of road accidents in Europe.
The target audience were young people between 18-25 years.

Contest: (youngartists4roadsafety.eu/​)
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nikkidoodlesx3Professional Digital Artist
As per your request, a small critique. I hope you find it helpful :)

:bulletblack: I feel like the jawline/neckline is cut a little too short and I know it's partially because of the stock and the child looking up, but maybe if you brought down the neck a bit it would help make it look a bit more realistic in a sense.
:bulletblack: Also the lines on the knees you can tell are just put there because they don't have that tiny little gap like the other robotic body pieces have.
:bulletblack: (optional) maybe you could even have a little bit of the hair overlap the yellow/black symbol as right now it looks like its just kind of pasted on top of the hair.

Overall though, I think this piece has a lot of potential and its a brilliant concept :)
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
First of all, thank you very much for the critique :)

As for your notes, I see then now, when I was doing this I tried to don't let anything pass and make all the details, but maybe because I spent so many time looking at it I didn't see :)
The hair part, I remember masking it a bit more, but then I decided to leave it like this to stand out more the symbol :)

Maybe with a couple more hours it would have been "perfected" :)

Thank you :)
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batmobilProfessional Interface Designer
nice
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
thank you
JetDsgn's avatar
Excelente!
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
Obrigado!!!!
Wishmaker2000's avatar
powerfull message!!! great work
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
thanks!!
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You would win if I were a contest judge. So clever and clean!
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
Thank you very much =) it wasn't one of the finalists but I'm really proud of this work =)
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isto é extremamente tocante!! muito bem apanhado, muito significativo e, sobretudo, totalmente CERTO! muito bom!
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
Muito obrigado pelo cometário!!!
telekat's avatar
Wow. This is amazing. One of the most brilliant pieces I've ever seen. I can't even put into words how much meaning I see in this.
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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Excelente trabalho!
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
Obrigado!
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Great work and message
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
Thanks
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My pleasure
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deerly-himeProfessional Digital Artist
Conceito fantástico :D
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
Muito obrigado =D
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deerly-himeProfessional Digital Artist
de nd c:
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BugPoisonHobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! It reminds me of Portal. =D
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JonnySnakeSevenProfessional Digital Artist
Thanks!! Hehe =D
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