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“I can’t write this story.” he said. He was staring at his desk. Checking if anything was being placed on his piece of paper. He recently broke up with his girlfriend. They broke up after he found out that she was actually a lesbian. She was using him to get money for shopping sprees and various other costly activities. He had enough of it one day, when a letter made him crash down into reality.
It was a letter from the bank. He was nearly broke. The letter was to tell him that his spending pattern was irregular. Of course, his girlfriend stole his credit card and bought it empty.
The man is going by the name of George. He was a rather short man. His face was that of a strict but understanding and kind teacher. Those teachers that are extremely strict yet friendly and make you feel comfortable.
He had brown hair, for now. Some guys have something that’s rather famine. His thing was that he sometimes painted his hair into different colors. He was actually plannin
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A lost writer
“You can’t possibly understand” he said. The pain was clear on his face. He was his end of breaking down. The mental cliff he wanted to jump from would take him to a point of no return. The blackness in his heart would rise to such a level, no shrink or therapy could possibly help him from it.
When his co-writer stopped writing with him, it felt like a knife which was being slowly sliced in every part of his body. While he accepted it at first, because he understood the situation, the pain couldn’t been taken away.
Since then, the death of somebody on the internet, even if he didn’t care about him or her much, was a heavy blow to him. When recently a great person he watched died and saw other of his favorite persons take a break from the internet, he felt the heavy blow.
He didn’t know what to do. He continued to shout in the empty hallways of the abandoned shopping mall. A mall which was old, lost and forgotten about. At some places, life could be f
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CreepyPasta: Do you believe it. :iconjonezjea:JonezJeA 5 9
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Character Bios - Lore Kayome
Name:
Lore Kayome
Gender:
Female
Age:
19
Species:
Demon
Information:
Lore started as hunter because her parents wanted her to follow their path. She is very passionate about Team Verepes and also about her hunter job.
For that she watches to Team Verepes’ every step. Her favourite member is Veoh. She actually fell in love with him and her hart was broken as he was taken in a dating show.
She was born as a Neko and never really understood why her parents where no Neko’s. She decided to let it go and wait for the answer.
Lore’s way to get anger and hate out her system is mostly verbally or by her music.
Characteristics:
Lore is kind. Maybe way too kind, but if you cross her line… You enter deadly area.
Lore can focus on something and then you may paint her black, she won’t lose her focus.
This girl is pretty playful and can be very naughty. When a prank can be pulled, she will BUT she is also ready to put someone to justice.
Current goal:
To get into Team V
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Character Bios - Blaire Broye (Full)
Name:  
Blaire Broye
Gender:
Male
Age:
At least 1600 years old.
Species:
Angel
Past life:
When Blaire was born, he had an usual childhood. His father was a good friend with the Lord of the Oververse at that moment. By a stroke of luck, he met Kinag and from that moment on, they became the best of friends.
Blaire studied to become a Lord but he eventually gave Kinag the chance and got the job as Advisor and General.
Blaire's personality somewhat flipped when his sister died. Till this day, he is still having a trauma from it.
Blaire met his wife in the Mainland. It was a rare opportunity and Blaire took it and ran with it.
Blaire has two daughters which mean a lot to him. Zana & Mika are the world to him. Even when Mika had her crime spree, Blaire still wanted to care about her as a daughter.
When the war broke out, Blaire was killed by a rough Angel. But his wife, which who he had two daughters, remembers his death in another way.
Personality:
He has a problem with women. He falls
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Poem - I was just left alone.
I was just left alone.
The WiFi didn't want to work on my phone,
I was just left alone.
I was waiting for two hours,
sometimes  looked to my flowers.
Why do live at the other side of the ocean,
we  should put that meeting plan in motion.
I was just left alone.
Waiting at home,
I was just left alone.
When you suddenly left, I felt totally broken.
Confused, was I maybe outspoken?
Friendship is what bounds us, that's how are chats went
after all those countless hours we spent.
I was just left alone.
I should have known,
I was left alone.
Unprepared and worried, I couldn't fall asleep.
Not even with counting sheep.
You live in that other timezone,
it gives me a chill to a bone.
I was just left alone.
My happy mood was blown.
I was just left alone.
Maybe you didn't foresee this as well,
then may the cause die in hell.
I realize that something might have interrupted you,
but I didn't had a clue.
I was just left alone.
The worries have only grown.
I was just left alone.
Maybe they t
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Story Snapshot - Jonez's complete snap.
Meanwhile, Jonez was sitting in his office. He had his head inside his hairs. Going through his hair. He was utterly confused, unable to accept certain facts. He was regretting several events. Next to him was a bag, fully packed with travelling materials. In front of him was a confused yet crying Loth, sitting uncomfortable in a chair.
Jonez: This... Could very well be the end...
Loth: Jonez! It's nothing we can't fix. It's...
Jonez looked crying to Loth. The discovery was made. He couldn't do anything anymore to hide it. Jonez's worst crime came above water. The one he hid since the start of his heroic career. He was doubting if he still wanted to continue on. Was he truly a hero...? Or was this mess up his last one? He didn't know. And the mess inside his head from the family worries was especially not doing him any good.
Loth took the blade from the desk. He examined it more closely. The old bloodstain was clear. Jonez couldn't escape this one. He did it. Loth was already telling a
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Story Snapshot - Another downfall
Coyo: Lady Sofiel, what is wrong?
Coyo said when Sofiel came back into her room. Coyo was worried about the one she has to guard.
Sofiel: Big bro.
Was the only thing she could say. The worry was just too big.
Coyo: Lady Nanthy!
Coyo shouted. Nanthy just arrived home, just missing Hei leaving. Nanthy heard Coyo's panic shout and Nanthy came upstairs and sat next Sofiel on the bed.
Nanthy: Sofiel, sweety. What's wrong?
Nanthy directly pulled Sofiel close to her. She directly realized that her daughter wasn't feeling happy. And it didn't take long that she also had the same "down" as Alan had. It was just getting too much.
Nanthy: It's okay... It's okay. Tell me, what exploded the bomb?
Sofiel replied in a weak voice. In a voice of disappointment, shame & regret.
Sofiel: Big bro left. He had a mission he said.... We failed him.
Nanthy's mood also directly flipped. First Vorona and now her son. She didn't know what to do. Her daughter needed her attention but since she heard Sofiel enterin
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Let's Take A Moment And Explain The Verses.
Let's take a moment & explain the verses.
Warning: These are the BASICS of the verses.
1. Which parts / inhabitants / Lords
* Oververse : Angels – Ruled by Kinag.
* Middleverse : Hybrids (Angel + Demon) – Ruled by Queen Hope.
* Otherverse: Demons – Ruled by Vantiem.
2. What are the verses?
Compare the basic idea to heaven & earth. Recently the three verses where 3 separate dimensions but they are now merged into one land. So… compare the verse now to one giant dimension where each verse is a country / city.
When a human dies, he or she gets evaluated to become … when done bad things a demon, when done good things… an angel and when both… well, a hybrid.
But when you live in the verses, inhabitants can ask the master to go to the mainland.
3. Who can enter?
Every angel, demon or hybrid. All other creatures need to be with a demon, hybrid or angel to teleport to the verses.
Some people can get permission to teleport at will.
Others have 'Verse Keys' whi
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Charater Bios: Sofiel Stetumya
Name:
Sofiel Stetumya
Gender:
Female
Age:
12
Species:
Angel / Unknown
Past life:
Sofiel was a cheerful girl. When she got born, her original dad left her and Nanthy behind.
Sofiel grew up under her mom's care and secretly helped a girl who was extremely bullied at school.
One day her mom and her met a cruel serial killing demon with the name of Nicki Iwata. Sofiel was murdered in front of her mother's eyes.
She came to the verses as an angel but then the angel Lord Kinag allowed Sofiel to return to her mother once more.
But when Nicki found this out, she killed Sofiel once again on the same way. Since then the location of her soul is unknown.
Personality:
Cheerful girl. She always tries to have the most fun possible.
She doesn't mind doing chores. It's to help out her family. And she tries to do them without being asked to do so. "Otherwise mommy will brag anyways and that's less game time."
Sofiel has a very strong sense of judgment. If something went wrong, she usually will admit eve
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WIP - Novel introduction
Jonez Denuro, a 21 year old man, walked down the gravel pathway. His red scarf blew along with the wind. He removed his brown short hair from his forehead so he could wipe off the sweat. It was a sunny day and Jonez decided to try and look for a new village to stay.
When you look at Jonez… you would see a man with a sort of creative vision. A man that you would find sitting behind his desk and writing stories about heroes and actually willing to be one.
In the world Jonez lives in, you have different sorts of heroes. People can do a heroic deed like saving somebody from a fire… but that doesn't make them a hero in these lands. You have to receive a Heroic Mark for that. This mark has special abilities… or so it has been rumored.
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NekoJonez - Interesting Characters
NekoJonez Tips – Not boring character?
Hello everybody and welcome at a new tutorial for writing stories. So, how do we create a not boring character?
That… is a simple but yet very difficult question. First of all… What is a not boring character anyways? That is an even harder question to answer since that one is personal. Here are some useful tips and tricks on how to improve your character and his or her personality.
1. The case of over powered.
A character that is nearly perfect or overpowered… Is a bad character. That statement is actually false. Those characters are mostly called superhero's. Not really always bad. But, it's how you implement these trades is what makes the difference.
Characters who are overpowered… Use them barely. Also, make something happen like another character go to the edge of death when using that given character. Like a guardian that nearly kills the one who he or she guards while defending with the "ultra super
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For some reason I start to image myself how much chaos it must be if one boat needed to move from one side to the other side. And let's...


I am known all over the internet under the alias of NekoJonez and from the moment I can write a story for a character drawn on a pictur...


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For those wondering if I'm still alive, well, I am. Since 2013, my life change a whole lot and I started to focus more on writing gaming articles. You can find my work here: arpegi.wordpress.com/

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I just became 21 years old. 
  • Listening to: Hardstyle.
  • Watching: YouTube
  • Playing: A lot of games
  • Drinking: Water

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JonezJeA
Jonez
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
Belgium
Reviewer of (old school) games & fantasy writer.

Currently 20.
Real name won't be given easily.

I write stories since childhood. And I have many of those on paper.
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:iconelfkena:
elfkena Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
happy birthday!
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JonezJeA Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. And so sorry for the late reply.
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elfkena Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob!
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shinigami-nataku Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Professional Writer
Hello.  Sorry to bother you but I am the moderator of a new group dedicated to Original Literature and wondered if you would be interested in joining?

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As a member you are also more than welcome to submit your written work to our gallery.  We currently only have about a 100 members but we're gradually growing larger each day and have just announced our first contest!

I hope that you will consider joining us soon.  If not, I apologise for taking up your wall space ;-)
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JonezJeA Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the invite. I'll keep this in mind and I might join. ~
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shinigami-nataku Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Professional Writer
^_^  You're welcome.  If you decide to you will be more than welcome ^_^
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CaptainFalcon21 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Happy b-day Jonez.
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elfkena Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
happy birthday :squee:
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JonezJeA Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you c:
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Kelacaolican Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Happy early birthday from #Kelacao! :party:
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