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Wordsmith, Issue One
This is one of the painted pages from the upcoming Iron Age Productions' mini-series Wordsmith. Pencils, inks and colours, me.
In which we discover our hero is a slobby git.
Alan Po discovers speaking his poetry has dark and powerful effects on the world around him. By Santana and Wyke. Coming late fall from Iron Age Productions.
Wordsmith is ©2011 Iron Age Productions. Writer Jon Santana. Artist Jonathan Wyke
Iron Age Productions site [link] (under construction)
Facebook Page [link]
MangaStudio Pencils / Illustrator Inks / Photoshop Colours
This is one of the painted pages from the upcoming Iron Age Productions' mini-series Wordsmith. Pencils, inks and colours, me.
In which we discover our hero is a slobby git.
Alan Po discovers speaking his poetry has dark and powerful effects on the world around him. By Santana and Wyke. Coming late fall from Iron Age Productions.
Wordsmith is ©2011 Iron Age Productions. Writer Jon Santana. Artist Jonathan Wyke
Iron Age Productions site [link] (under construction)
Facebook Page [link]
MangaStudio Pencils / Illustrator Inks / Photoshop Colours
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique Impacthi, the lineart is pretty nice and well done, but i must say the coloring is still too flat for me, not enough depth, the shadow area needs darker colors.
On the drawing itself, i would put many more line strokes here and there to punch more detail and help the image depth too.
Object drawing is okay, proportion is very nice.
I must say this is a very good style and can be well accepted in the market.
After all my saying, maybe this is just your style, if so then carry on with confidence! This is marketable already IMHO.
I hope my critique can help you, sorry if it cannot <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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