11 Comments854 Views
Finally finished the pencils on this page!
800x1200px 882.52 KB
6 stars on composition!
6 stars on render.
It took a second look for me see why I eyes went to the figure.
the shadow on the left is a line pointing to her. directly and indirectly.
the perspective on the right helps point to her.
the far right fire escape shadows stops you from going off the right of the page.
the far right fire escape shadows at bottom finally send you in her direction.
the top line of facing windows point to her, and are the only windows on that side of the building.
the arch and smaller fire escape shadow puts a subtle frame around her area.
the drone is against all white so it stands out also but it's looking at her.
Her suitcases points to her and sorta repeats the end of the largest shadow.
Then there's a frekin' stop sign that TELLS you to STOP right where she is.
Withen her smaller frame ...with the arch and far fire escape... it's sort of surprising that she pops out even after you drop her on the detail of the background. but making it white would probably make it look contrived while what you have here looks as if it's naturally composed... or barely composed.
And as usually your render is strong clean but still with a hint of humanity. It's not just cold and technical.
well done sir. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="26" height="18" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="455" title="I salute you!"/>