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Siren's Stare

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Don't trust her beauty...

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This photo was taken by my sister :iconpixiecold: with her brandnew camera, she also did the makeup.. So it would be very nice of you to switch over to her gallery as well and give her some love! :D :heart:
The editing in Photoshop was done by me, I have to say that Photo-editing is so much fun! :la: There may follow more like this! :D
The eye belongs to my other sister, she has two-colored eyes in real life! It's so cool! :D

I hope you like it! Favs, comments and critiques are highly appreciated! :la: :heart:

Work by my sister:


My work:
Image details
Image size
1072x605px 785.88 KB
Make
FUJIFILM
Model
X-S1
Shutter Speed
1/40 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
800
Date Taken
Jan 29, 2012, 8:33:10 AM
Sensor Size
4mm
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BlueMoonScorpio's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is really unique how you've done the scales around the eye. It is also nice to see that the iris is somewhat rainbow.(When people think of Sirens, they most often see beauty. You've certainly captured that. You;ve added different shades of color, so it isn't boring. You've liened up the piece with light and shading. You've also made the piece intriguing. Or you could say "mysterious." Whichever you prefer. It is entirely, up to you. The glitter and water droplets add a nice touch to the piece.So overall I think you did a ery good job on this artwork.
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I really enjoy this piece. At first I thought the makeup had been edited too, but when I looked closer, it looked too real. I think that the coloring on the eyes really adds to the dynamic and the overall impact of the work, a stunning addition that was needed to make the makeup "Pop".

I feel, when looking at this, that I'm staring at the face of some mythological creature from long ago, like a dragon or a mermaid, but I think your title nailed the picture's true nature.

On the Makeup, the lines are crisp and almost symetrical. So much so that I thought it was photoshopped at the beginning. As I've said, I have never seen an edited photo that preserved the skin texture beneath it so well. This is how I noticed that this was more like a very clever makeup job.

You did some good work here. Keep it up.
JoJoesArt's avatar
Thank ou for this awesomely amazing critique! :heart:
You're welcome! I found the picture amazing :)
DiannaLewis's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is honestly one of the best macro photos I've seen in a while. The makeup and the colors have so much of an impact as well as the expression which you can tell by the look in her eye.

The textures to the left almost made me think this photo was edited because it's so almost symmetrical. Whoever done the makeup here is extremely talented. I also love the bold colors of the eye itself and how it's almost blurred at the bottom so there's not much focus to take away from the makeup. Great job to everyone involved.
JoJoesArt's avatar
Thank you so much for this awesome critique! :heart:
DiannaLewis's avatar
It's no problem. Thank you for sharing such a magnificent photograph.
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rosefai's avatar
Hello, your awesome work has been featured here [link] Have a great day! :dalove:
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LonelySorceress's avatar
I thought this was a photomanipulation!!!!! :omg: This is....amazing!!
SaraPereiraArt's avatar
Your sister is very talented
Birthstone's avatar
Hi,
your amazing work has been featured
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AskQ's avatar
I love this photo!! Do you know what lens your sister used for this?
DarkFlyingAngel's avatar
I like her eye! So beautiful... love it so much!!!
PixieAndHerPixels's avatar
This is beautiful, the colours are immaculate!
cryingunderwater's avatar
You have been featured here: [link] :squee:
EnduringLove's avatar
that eye color, wow, just wow.
WishingUnderThatStar's avatar
Your wonderful work has been chosen to be featured in Friday Feature Volume II :la:
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cryingunderwater's avatar
Just amazing! Adore you both!!
CindyJade's avatar
:wow: I love the overall composition. :heart: The colors complement each other perfectly, as do the scales and swirls... You guys outdid yourselves :clap:
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