As an afterthought - [link]
Good close ups of characters in similar situation.
If you include more of the face you can express more - also the eye opens to show more white above and below the iris in a situation of terror (perhaps not the sentiment here)
you could garner crunchyroll attention if you included ryuk instead of a skull - if that were you interest. If you've not seen death note, I have a feeling you will be soon.
Just allowing the disturbance to grow