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Can I sleep IN your bed tonight?

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... cause there's a spider UNDER your bed...

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As many requested, here is a wallpaper version of my design for the deviantwear-contest! :D Little cutie monster being afraid of a spider under your bed and now asking to sleep in your bed! ^^

Here is my design:



I would be soo happy if you vote for me!! :heart:

-- favs and comments are highly appreciated!! :hug: --
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kori-the-cat's avatar
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This is a very nice piece. I like the amount of shading you used, and how his face stands out brighter. The background contrasts him. I like the fact that you (in the wallpaper and shirt) made him say, "Can I sleep IN your bed tonight?" Thats original. I adore that he's holding the pillow and the little rabbit, and wearing the night cap, as it makes it look like he's more sad and willing. Also the tears in his eyes. Adorable!
Vision: 5 stars for the look you've given.
Originality: 4.5 stars because I have seen "Monster under the bed" kind of things before like this.
Technique: 5 stars for the style of painting and the perfect amount of shading.
Impact: 4.5 stars because the contrast is great.
JoJoesArt's avatar
Thank you so much for the critique! :heart:
kori-the-cat's avatar
No problem :) You did a great job.
ganunba-questionmark's avatar
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It IS cute. I love the colors used here for the background especially. I also love every detail you have done in the pic from the tooth to the horns and the stars. The reason for the star drop in the originality is because I've seen pictures like these (or similar ones with a different cute monster) before and the one used here looks like something that came out of a Yu-Gi-Oh! card (I forgot the name of the card though, my classmate has one). No hard feelings, I know this is freaking hard to make and it is awesome and I love it.
JoJoesArt's avatar
Thank you so much for the critique! :heart:
kayleighmc's avatar
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Aww I absolutely love this! Its such an original idea, and I'm very glad you made it into a wallpaper. The shadows on the pillow are quite well done, and I love the way you painted the tears, they seems almost, gooey? I really like them! I especially love the colours of the background. The only criticism I have say is that the stars on the nightcap seem a little choppy, they don't really look like part of the fabric, but more as though they were pasted on.

Nonetheless, props to you for creating a very cute image out of a...well.. rather nasty creature and please keep up the excellent work!
JoJoesArt's avatar
Thank you so much for the critique! :heart:
kayleighmc's avatar
No problem! Its so adorable :D
Plunts101's avatar
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wonderful it fucking piece of good art i fucking love it fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fucking amazing i love it its really cool and cute i think you should use it in some form of media like a book or character or something. Im serious it is fucking amazing i think its really really good. it must have been really hard to make. i wonder how much time you put in to it but im sure its alot. You are an amazing artist keep up the good work.
Star-Gazr44's avatar
...was it really necessary to say "fuck" over 9000 times?
Star-Gazr44's avatar
...and how, exactly?
Plunts101's avatar
I have my ways motherfucker
Plunts101's avatar
Sorry this is my idiot friend's account I couldn't just let her spout profanity the whole time to I took over... As you can see I pretty much do everything for her
JoJoesArt's avatar
Thank you so much for the critique! :heart:
Plunts101's avatar
u r fucking welcomed
Star-Gazr44's avatar
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It's so cute!
I mostly love how the eyes look and the little stuffed rabbit.

I honestly can only think of three ways you could make this better.

First, I think the wittle monster would look alot better in a slightly more suitable background, like a bedroom,
change the shading to match the background,
and maybe redo the arms a bit.

A few more stars on its hat wouldn't hurt, either.
I'm pretty sure that besides that, it's perfect.

(This isn't part of the critique. This part is actually here to...basically finish off the 100 minimum. I hate the minimum.)
JoJoesArt's avatar
Thank you so much for the critique! :heart:
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01284949912's avatar
sure u can *make bed for him/her to sleep*
GoodCredit12's avatar
He is so cute Omg so cute 
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