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Eagle Of Liberty by JohannLacrosaz Eagle Of Liberty by JohannLacrosaz
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Over all I am a BIG fan of this look. The only part bringing it down the is the mask, the hooking nose and smooth head, meant to resemble an American Bald Eagle I am sure, looks too much like animal furry cosplay. Making the nose/beak less hooked and maybe flaring the sides of the mask Hakwman/Hawkgirl style might offset the look. Again this is merely personal taste and nothing more. Overall I like this piece.

Sadly I have to come up with another 20 words to end this critique, I feel like I am in high school again. ;)

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roygbiv666 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015
Very nice, I like it. Your style is sweet. From a design perspective, I find it a bit "busy", but I'm old ;-) I think the transition from the white mask to the grey/black to the blue chest eagle a bit cluttered; I would just extend the blue of the chest piece up to meet the mask directly. What if you connected the chest eagle to the shoulder things? I'd also probably simplify the white 'tail' into a white belt or something. But that's just a personal view, YMMV.
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JohannLacrosaz Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
eagle of liberty V2 by JohannLacrosaz thank you very much for your remarks
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Victor2K Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
So great
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JohannLacrosaz Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you !!
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