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logotype by JoffOnline logotype by JoffOnline
streetwear line logotype, comments are welcome !
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dawmail333 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
I'd love to post a critique, but I'm not a premium member :P

It's interesting, and I think it kind of works. I'll run through the four designs from top to bottom for you:

1) Interesting. I think the design and use of colours works quite nicely there.
2) Using blue for the majority of the text just doesn't quite work: I like to think of these styles in terms of background, contrast (foreground) and accent colours. Use your contrast mostly, with a small amount of accent. It seems to work better. (Each to their own, though!)
3) I like this one best. The blue fits as an excellent accent when working with the white, and it really just does look like something you'd see as the (price) tag on a pair of shorts. Whilst the missing bits on the last two designs added character, I think the clean look is a better idea for this piece. IMHO.
4) Not a fan of the glow effect, particularly where the o and w meet. Just looks mess, overall.

Nice work though. I like it.
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JoffOnline Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
thanks for the comm ! i really appreciate it !
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