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A Derpy Love Story page 1

By JoeyWaggoner
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Story, Pencils and Inks by: :iconjoeywaggoner: Colors by: :icondcjoedog:

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

now what to talk about...the artwork is amazing!its so cartoony and a well colored setting!i really like how the ponies look so alive!now about the story,it really shows how deroy and doctor hooves really connect. the vision is really clear everything about this is just amazing!i would love to see more from u. really need to fill it like 41 more words so im just going to spam now. D to the E to the R,P,Y!
nopony haves the moves of my big wall eye!im derpycious!well i dont know what else to say soo bye i guess?ya...ok!derpy rocks!really she dose!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Alright, I thought I might give a go on this critique thing... it's my first, so sorry if it's bad.

The story is very smooth, and each panel left me wondering 'What's going to happen next?' That's the kind of story I like! Creative, and stands out from the others!

As for your art style, personally, I don't really like the eyes that much, especially the eyelashes are... pretty long. It's kind of weird, but overall your art style is fascinating, and cute. Oh and I love the way The Doctor was drawn, he's adorable!

I love this DerpyxDoctor shipping a lot, so the impact on me was really high, full of d'awws no matter how many times I decided to read this, or listen to the dub.

So in conclusion, this comic is very well done, and I'd love to see more from you in the future!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I have a lot to say on this one, but it's my first review so sorry if it's bad.


I definitely like the art, though the eyes look weird for the mares. I honestly don't like those really long eyelashes. I love the "shocked into unconsciousness" part (i heard the whole thing on a youtube comic dub) and i love the Rainbow Dash "ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh" quote. This needs to be 100 words so ummmm l love the colors though you didn't do them, they are every show accurate. The wings for derpy look good and overall I give mostly 5 stars although subtracting a half-star for the long eyelashes.
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Derpy: "Smart Aleck."

Carrot Top: "And proud of it!"
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DidgereethebronyHobbyist Digital Artist
This seems very promising...
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love it!  Disgust Chat Icon Heart 
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did a fan made animation of this ^^
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the drawing is terrible u need to work on it not to be rude and so for the eyelashes
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It's been dubbed!…
:D I love this story so much!
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superrandomfangirlStudent Filmographer
Im going to do it in spanish, i gave you the credits.
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lol derpy dont try that excuse i've used it before my friend said so you were with your boyfriend what excuse did i use??? this one "he;s not my boyfriend we're just opposites of gender who do various catagorys of activitys together"
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TheREALTwilightSparkHobbyist General Artist
My only problem is your verbiage. It's not 'boy and girl,' it's 'stallion and mare.'
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YuntaoXDHobbyist General Artist
High school logic.
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Funny, cute, amazing, and a good story line to, well sort of. however the one thing what bothers me is the way they are drawn out. but overall 6/10
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MikkilleribHobbyist Artist
Yay. Finally found it. I can also hear the dubbed voices from the video featuring this.
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I don't like how big they're eyelashes are
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Yeah, me neither. I mean, I understand how the art style is supposed to be cartoony they didn't have to make the eyelashes 10 feet long. 
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yay, spain's flag is in the title, SPAIN! XD
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I read the whole comic and know why, For a Fan comic it wasn't all that bad,
for a DerpyXDoctor comic it was very Okay but I think my favorite of the artwork is the art the comic is drawn.
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I never knew doing tons of activities with a girl can be dating.
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AW! So cute! Those eyes are so big!! So cartoonie!!
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Portal15ArtHobbyist General Artist
Hi Joey, I really like me your art style. I want to ask you something, what is this font that you used in this comic ?? I wanna do the translation to Spanish and I need that font, can you say me it ?? :D

(Sorry for my bad english) :P
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The font I use is Apple Casual.
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Portal15ArtHobbyist General Artist
Thank you Joey !! :D
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