JOEYDES

Anytime! It's easy when you really like the piece like I do! I just hope it helped.

The Doctor has definitely been done justice by this fine piece! The composition is spot on (even the original line work). The pose is wonderful and the fact that he's breaking the "fourth wall" with his stare is awesome. The only thing I would critique (since you ask) is that the finished piece did not incorporate the entirety of the line art. The wispy magical energy is great, but the floating badminton ball and coffee cup were inspired. I know you didnt color this, but you asked for the critique. I see no fault in your line art and technical skill. It's the judgement call of not involving the entire piece that I question. The original line art had more impact and wow factor than the finished/colored piece.

I've always liked your lines. Great emerging style...very original. As for the inking? He (?) controls his line weights pretty well. Fore/mid/back fall in line really well. The only crit I would have for your inker is to be more aware of his lighting and to carry that through each figure. There seems to be multiple light sources in this piece which is no prob...light is everywhere, I know, but on the main figure the shadow play stops abruptly at his waist. Looks unfinished. Carrying those shadows down the whole figure would have finished this piece nicely. All told, a great piece. Can't wait to see more.

This is a beautiful piece. The project looks awesome. You (the colorist) has requested a critique so I'll limit my comments to your bits. The city under the central figure is lit beautifully. Very dramatic and absolutely in keeping with the perspective. The only critique I can really offer for this piece is the figure of Blindside himself. It seems superimposed onto the bg. By this, I mean it is lit separately. The city is lit internally with the heavy shadows on all the rooftops indicating a night scene. The figure isn't lit to convey that he is there...swinging above the city. He should be lit from behind as that is the light source. Heavier shadows on his front and bright rim lighting to put him in the scene. I hope this helps.