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jobo123

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  • Apr 14, 1990
  • Australia
  • Deviant for 15 years
  • He / Him
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My Bio
Current Residence: Coburg Vic
deviantWEAR sizing preference: Medium
Favourite genre of music: maaany
Operating System: i7 Quad Core (windows7)
MP3 player of choice: iPhone
Favourite cartoon character: Allan Walker
Personal Quote: live big... real big

Favourite Visual Artist
My friends; phoebe, shan, naya, dewald
Favourite Movies
EternalSunshineOfTheSpotlessMind
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
The mars volta
Favourite Games
MGS4, zelda OOC, bioshock
Favourite Gaming Platform
xbox 360
Tools of the Trade
wacom cintiq 12
Other Interests
CG, film, Games, Friends, Anatomy

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Comments

:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile) - :)"/> ~! i really enjoyed this animation.
I really like the editing and imagination of the concept. The robot/creature was animated beautifully, with great camera angles showing off the effort, thought and love put into the movement. There's just a couple of things i think you could improve on in the future, The texturing and modelling of the assets and room itself are a little bit low quality, I would suggesting spending a bit more time laying out the UV's on surfaces such as the bear and the rocking horse.
The face of the robot is different and unusual ( i really like it for its simplicity ) however, im sure your computer would be able to handle a few more polys up there.. its just a little off putting when you have a close up of the face and you can see the polys jumping out at you.
Overall though, i really loved it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile) - :)"/> As i said the editing was great, the concept is awe inspiring and the whole thing had great art and emotion. So in summation; a little more practice with the technical stuff will go a long way.
The Mechanical Ghost
Ah woops, didnt read the description (face palm) .. well you did quite well for an architectural program then. You should have a go at some trial versions of maya or 3dsmax or c4d :)
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