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Episode 5 003 Back to the darkness... by JimLiesman Episode 5 003 Back to the darkness... by JimLiesman
"Huah!" After diving for a while, at last Ilisono arrived at an air pocket. Listya, who led her, appeared after that.

"So, what do you think?" Asked Listya after she took a breath to refresh her air.

"What do I think? Well, what do you think? It's pitch black down there. Without my ability--and yours too--I don't think someone could survive there."

Ilisono wasn't exaggerating. The cave they just passed was filled with absolute darkness. No light at all. As in, they couldn't see anything without their special ability.

"Hehehee, Kave was right, Miss Ilisono is pretty grumpy," Listya laughed innocently, Ilisono wasn't able to retort. Then, she continued, "This is where I shall show you the best of a Blakkdite's ability," The blond girl took a small Blakkdite from a small pocket she was carrying on the back of her bikini, "Let's dive once again, Miss Ilisono."

"O-okay..." Listya already dived under when Ilisono finished replying. Then the black haired girl followed Listya.

Back to the darkness... Mumbled Ilisono when she realized she cannot see anything. Then, she activated her ability and suddenly she could see Listya's behind going further from her. Ilisono started chasing her. When Listya stopped and turned around, Ilisono also stopped.

Listya put her index finger on her lips, on her eyes, then smiled, as if she was saying, Hold you breath for a bit and turn off your ability. Ilisono did what Listya told her and she's back in the darkness.

Even for a rather experienced Treasure Hunter like Ilisono, she still felt uneasy in the middle of absolute darkness. In fact, it's one of her biggest fear, as she's always able to see wherever she was with her ability. This made Ilisono's heart rate increased, and periodically she started letting out some air.

She just kept asking question in her mind, I-I don't think I'm enjoying this. I feel dizzy... When will she.. I-I will blame her if I drown here...

Then suddenly Ilisono's eyes were filled with light. At first, she didn't know where did it come from. But then she realized it's in front of her. It's from the Blakkdite Listya was holding. The blonde girl laughed a bit, letting some air out.

Amazing. So this is the power of Blakkdite, which is able to power magic lamp underwater. Ilisono smiled, Looking at how useful these are, the high price wasn't surprising at all.
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Gothiccross666 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017
to bad that you didn´t continued it. hopefully you will come back one day to this story. But please do what you want because then your art is the best^^
JimLiesman Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My decision to stop continuing this was because it seems like people doesn't really care about the series... But not only that. This story was too ambitious for me that was a total newbie back then. I already planned several dozen characters, places, scenarios... I should've tried making something that's much simpler for my first series. Well, at least two people missed this series ^_^ Maybe if more people want me to continue it, I can think about it... ^_^

Thank you very much!
Diakon454 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Well count three people now. I loved this when I read this a while back, and I was a bit saddened when I found a dead stop here :( (Sad)
Good thing there's an air pocket nearby, otherwise it'd be worse...
Gothiccross666 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017
maybe then you got more experience with storytelling you can come back to this series and can bring your vision to reality. but your mini-storys are great as well.
GrayComputer Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2016  Student Digital Artist
JimLiesman Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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