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FINALLY!

I hope y'all like how I portray Screamer. It used to be that I thought I'd never dare try portraying him lol.

:iconknighty424: was nice enough to review this for me :) since she likes Starscream a lot.
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knighty424 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
Um, I wasn't sure where to post my review so I'm just writing it here.
Before starting, I would like to note that some of the English in my writing could be weird because I'm not a native speaker, and that I might be making misunderstandings about what you wrote.

Okay, so overall, I was like "wow this is a good analysis!" But it was really hard to read. The characters size was too small, and the color contrast between the background and the character wasn't really pleasing for my eyes...I think you can make it easier to read.

However, You went into so much detail about the movie-verse Starscream, and made good connections between his personalities and the way he behaves.
I kinda chuckled when I saw the holo-form you chose for Starscream. You chose a good looking one. lol
Sorry I don't have any further comments about that. I don't really go for humanization and holo-forms, because I simply just cannot think them as transformers' real selves.

The RP sample was pretty interesting too. You have described Starscream as an actual air-commander. That hasn't happened that much in the official stories so I think you should keep showing more of his professional side as a second in command and an air commander, but without forgetting about his treacherous and mean sides. He can't be good as Megatron, but I think there is a reason why he remains to be a second in command. ;D

I hope my review helps. :please: Sorry if I'm lacking some comments on things you wanted to actually hear.
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Jetta-Windstar Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2018
I'm sorry it took me so long to respond to this but I do appreciate the input on this profile-it was very helpful! I may have to resubmit the profile with a different color scheme if its a bit hard to read. I'm glad you like how I portray the character though, in this format. Since making this profile I haven't used him all that much, and I'm not sure I will again. But it's good to know a few people liked what I did with his character. 
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ElitaOneArts Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Oh wow, Nice work.... Are you bring him to Convergence?
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Jetta-Windstar Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
I shall consider it, I'll probably be using him (if im not sick of him by then :P), Ratchet, and maybe one other.^^
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ElitaOneArts Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
YAY, ^^ sounds good... we will have to let who ever comes to RP, know which Canons are taken...
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Jetta-Windstar Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
indeed, someone from the staff should make a list once more profiles are up.
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ElitaOneArts Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah ^^ it would ether be me or Katt.
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Leathurkatt-TFTiggy Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice!
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Jetta-Windstar Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
thanks, Kattness :)
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Leathurkatt-TFTiggy Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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