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I'll accept manga. My personal fave right now is Stejepan Sejic he's actually on deviant art

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I've always wanted to start a comic of my own creation with my own characters and setting. I think my story and characters and settings have the necessary depth it's just I'm not really a writer and have no idea how to start or if my art is appealing enough to live up to standards.
My idea is to have 3 main comics each in a one of the 3 realms and maybe spin offs to delve deeper into certain characters.

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Tempest's story starts when she was a child.She was always a strange child able to transform to a cat like beast each night. She lived in the streets of a slum where she had to steal food and money just to survive as an orphaned little girl.Eventually she would learn to control her tranformation and could do it at will be it day or night which helped her immensely for her largest heists. She always had trouble with authoritive figures. She would get by on scraps and scamming locals until one fateful day when she was 13 she robbed the wrong man. A man of incredible wealth but the entire slum fell under his thumb and he controlled everything and got away with anything he pleased. When Tempest robbed his personal treasury he was enraged and had her captured and brought to him. A fat slob of a man surrounding himself with his personal guard. He would scorn her for her actions and for her punishment he would have her. The sleeze would have his guards seal them in a room together as he attempted to mount her. The guards outside were struck by a shill scream clattering and banging. Eventually silence fell upon them as one guard timidly opened the door to see the room splattered with blood and the 13 yr old girl sitting in the middle her eyes glowing a menacing yellow. She would slay them before nimbly escaping through a nearby window. At the death of the slum lord the reigns of the city were passed along to a surprisingly worse leader. The 8 yr old son of the slum lord would become leader. His first action was to hire a ruthless hunter to execute Tempest for her actions. The seasoned hunter handily slays her a collects his pay.

As you know though her death in the mortal realm would only be the beginning of her story. She would pass on to the hell realm. When people die as children they retain their original body and strength.They age but time in hell passes far slower then in the mortal realm. As you can obviously imagine it was tough for a 13 yr old girl to survive in hell's dog eat dog environment even if she was a cat beast she was still far smaller then most of hell's inhabitants and children rarely last long. She would scrounge for her meals and slay one's weaker then her to attain power for her survival. She would eventually group with other children in hopes of helping them and become part of a child mafia ranging from 4 to 19 years old where they'd all watch eachother's back and act as a family. She would eventually meat her 1st friend in hell Clowse. He was a very violent child who was 3 years her younger. Everything seemed to be going well when they were attacked by one of the overseers' militaries led by commander Bardock Lawson. He was rumored to be a cruel man but the children had no idea how cruel. Bardock would proceed to slay the children claiming it was a test. If they deserved their soul intact they would prove it to him. It was a bloody massacre only 5 of them would be allowed to live and Bardock would draft them into his army and train them to be perfect soldiers, destroy and claim the souls of those who disobeyed.To Bardock children were a rare commidity and could be raised to be the perfect warriors he could mold with his desires and ideals. Only Tempest and Clowse would prove capable of surviving till there twenties. She would bide her time waiting to escape one day and told Clowse of her plans.
She didn't realize that Clowse was enamored with the commander and viewed him as a father figure. Clowse would wind up betraying her and tell Bardock of her escape plans on the day of the escape. Shit immediately hit the fan but Bardock had made her an incredibly capable warrior and many of his men would prove to be nothing more then fodder. Bardock was furious and eventually entrusted Clowse to be the one to slay her and claim her soul. She would make a mad dash for a hole in the far east wall of the encampment she had diligently created and hidden from prying eyes. It was truly perfect but she had told Clowse of it who was waiting by the opening with two more elite soldiers trained since a young age just as she had been............
Tempest origins part 1
I'll spell check it tomorrow and hopefully add a part 2. I admit I am kinda slow lol
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This is the first in depth explanation of one of my characters and how hell came to be fractured into 8 pieces. Aswell as my 1st attempt at a story so lol here we go.



Many many years ago there was a great and powerful king who ran hell and rumored capable to stand blow to blow with even the gods. He was in control of everybody and everything in the vaste realm of hell. He ruled over the denizens with a brutal iron fist. He would wipe out any and all who dare stand against him with his mighty halberd said to destroy mountains through the raging winds of the shockwaves when he swung it. He had but one arm, piercing firey eyes and scars covered his body head to toe. He was able to summon flames hotter then any of the deepest fire pits of hell. He was a large heavily armored man who even the most fearsome of demons and dragons obey without hesitation less be added to the corpses already accumulated. Very little is known of this mad king for he is very anti social and seems to look upon the rest of the demons and tortured souls as lesser beings almost as if he doesn't belong in even this existence. But this isn't the story of  his many exploits and unbelievable power but a story of how he cam to know bitter defeat.
The king had built up quite a reputation and was hated by the majority of hell due to his ruthless personality. A huge army had amassed outside of his castle. He stood upon the balcony looking down upon a seemingly endless supply of troops  led by 8 very power warriors of hell some decent souls others insanity driven monsters currupted from there millions of years in hell. No matter who it was they all had a reason to stand and risk there very existence and souls to wipe the mad king from the face of reality. Even with an army so far back no eyes could see the end of it.  At this point they still stood absolutely no chance.
In a cloud of fire and brim the king rushed towards the army he would wipe hell out completely if he had to. The tower of his castle falling behind from the shockwave of his exit. He moved faster then any of them could even see. Before the debris even touched the ground the king had destroyed many with just a couple punches. The carcasses being flung into the air around him as he rose up from a mist of blood. A truly terrifying sight to behold "COME YOU PITIFUL FOOLS, IT MATTERS NOT YOUR NUMBERS OR YOUR SIZE" he roared as he would tear a enormous demons horn out and run it through it's head "YOU COULD NEVER MATCH ME IN THE ART OF WAR" as he launched the horn at a group of horrified warriors. The king was ripping the army apart with ease even the most powerful were nothing but a punching bag. The army would begin to dwindle as he mercilessly slaughtered them  with no end in sight.
Suddenly a bright light blinded the king as 9 weapons manifested in the middle of the remnants of the fallen troops.The king sneered "so even after all you've done you still stand against me, DAMN YOU CHRONUS". The king then raised his arm in to air and the legendary halberd appeared in his hand as he swung it easily with his one arm creating powerful winds cutting hundreds in half. The remaining soldiers could feel an incredible aura eminenating from the weapons but actually getting a hold of one was proving to be incredibly difficult as the king would immediately focus any who dared even reach for them. Things still looked grim but now there was a smidgen of hope for them and the king clearly recognized how dangerous the weapons were. In another flash of light there was a figure standing opposite the ferocious king. An immense blinding light radiating from the figure, the king looked at him with rage" that coward sent you for me Osiris. Disgusting" in a speed no eyes could comprehend the king rushed this "Osiris" but unbelievably Osiris managed to hold his own even as the king attacked with his mighty halberd .Osiris would suddenly sprout enormous white wings and shoot a massive gust powerful enough to blow back all the soldiers in the vicinity. Osiris and the king fought a wicked battle almost mesmerizing to see such powerful beings collide but finally the soldiers realized this was there chance they could attain the weapons that appeared before them.
They decided to give the strongest remaining warriors the weapons for as much of a chance as possible. After each weapon was given to the appropriate warriors Osiris just stopped and while breathing heavily clearly starting to faulter he said " I'm sorry... My closest friend" and with that in another flash of light he was gone. He left the remainder of this war to them. It was the final leg of this intense battle. It was The mad king of damned vs 9 of the mightiest warriors in hell. It would still be a bloody battle but now they had the power to atleast stand up to him. The warriors all rushed him at once they matched blows with the  king and the nine of them proving to be a true challenge to him. But slowly they would each begin to faulter the king would launch his halberd pinning one them to a mountain  before teleporting to him and ripping it and shoving it through his face. Another would rush the king from behind only to be caught by the halberd and slammed into the ground cutting him in half leaving 7.  Then 5 would move in at once somehow the king blocked all 5 attacks at once the ground crumbling below his feet. But in blink of an eye the king appeared above them and rocketing  downwards flame shooting from his halberd as he'd land with all his might cutting one in half length wise and rapturing the foundation of hell causing a massive hole and multiple incredibly deep crevices spreading across the entire realm. The explosion would disintegrate the other four letting the ashes be blown away by the wind. The king tiring after such a powerful attack. He'd breathe heavily but suddenly looked down to realized he'd been run through by one of the remaining two soldiers. As the warrior tried to pull away the king would grab his arm and headbutt the soldier and lift him by the face slowly crushing his skull blood squirting from his orifices as the king slowly  would close his hand slowly as the warrior went limp. Then suddenly the final warrior a bloody mess would rush taking both the kings legs and causing him to fall to the ground for the 1st time. The king rolled over to look up at the exhausted warrior who quietly said "any last words, you damned monster". The king coughed and croaked out " I have no regrets" and accepted his demise as the warrior grabbed his weapon and ran him through piercing his heart. He rose to look at the destroyed hell and walked away to search for remaining survivors.

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Chris Barrett
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I am awesome......simply awesome

Current Residence: Montana
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Favourite genre of music: Metal and Alternative...i'll listen to anything tho
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Favourite style of art: comic, favorite artist is Jim Lee, Jason Fabok and Kenneth Rocafort
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Wallpaper of choice: prob something Batman related
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Favourite cartoon character: Batman
Personal Quote: Life is a ride on a highway, dodging bullets to find your way
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CDL113 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Thank you for the Faves! :+fav: :XD:

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Thank you for the Faves! :+fav: :XD:

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KrisLalev Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for that phat awesome watch!! I'm here to improve and not dissapoint my watchers!! CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU! Heart Heart Heart 
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geez
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jesusjr Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hello
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Request or not?
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jesusjr Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What kind of request you want and I only upload once a week so it wouldn't be up till Thursday
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Thank you for the Faves! :+fav: :XD:
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Anytime bro
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