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I begin to fall
I begin to drown
Fall back again
Drown once more

A fool's mistake
Ocean One
"Foolishness"
I wish to turn back the clock

Word's untrue
Ocean Two
"Disrespect"
I want to apologize

A sad tune
Ocean Three
"Unthankful"
That moment frozen in time

Broken Dreams
Ocean Four
"Fear"
I deserve these dreams

Leave me to my own devices
Ocean Five
"Unkind"
Please speak

Fall back
Ocean Six
"Depression"
The answers are gone

The thought of you
Ocean Seven
"Loneliness"
I turn to leave

The Oceans pounded your shores
I know what you think
"Forgive you....
Why? You hung me out to dry..."

Forgive me
Your laugh....
It makes the pain go away
It makes the rain pass by

A drop of hope
Falls from these eyes
Please forgive
I turn to go alone

I walk
The voices in me whisper
"Foolish boy...
Why must it be this way?"
I wrote this to my friend Sarah after we had a fight...
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WindBurned Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2004
that is a creative peom. i like the way u organized it
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