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I miss our long talks

I miss our long walks

I miss when we'd stay up late watching movies

I miss our phone conversations until early in the morning

I miss all our text messaging

I miss our letters (handwritten and emails)

I miss looking nearly every night into your pretty eyes

I miss hearing your voice

I miss all the words that would pass between us as time stood still, but once I had to leave time went by oh so quickly

I miss telling you all my secrets

I miss hearing yours

I miss anxiously awaiting to read your poetry

I miss anxiously awaiting to hear how your day was

I miss telling you how mine was

I miss our long goodbyes

Hell I miss Everything...
I wrote this about three friends. Each Line could represent one or more of them...
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Rainywolf Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2004
Nice one. Sad......
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jester81 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2004
Yeah. I missed spending time with them. My friend Harry is in Italy now. My friend sarah two states away (SC) and Marie... Well that's another story all together
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TearDrop- Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2004   Writer
Wow. I really like this peom. It has a lot of meaning. I like that you started every line with 'I miss' Some poems repetition dosen't really work out that well, but it turned out very nicely in yours. There is one error however...but I am not sure if it is how you meant it..

I miss when we's stay up late watching movies

I think that it is supposed to just be we....
Well I am going to read somemore...but one more Great job on this poem :)
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