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A million pins
Stabbing away
Bleeding heart
Rolling tears

A million thoughts
Scratching away
Questions unanswered
Tearing away

Hollow and numb
Won’t describe
Empty and sad
More than prescribed

Fighting uselessly
Against your tears
Beating mercifully

Anything I can offer
Is yours for the asking
Anything I can do
I will in a heartbeat

My heart goes out to you
Yours if you need it
Shoulder or a hand
Handshake or a hug

If you need anything
Part your lips
Let the words fall out
My heart goes out to you in your time of need...
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silverdruid Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
Hello I have a friend who recommended i read your stuff. this was really heartfelt man. deep. wicked job dude
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jester81 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
I've been recommended. Sweet. :) Thanks for checking my stuff out.
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silverdruid Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
you know her as Lee. she told you you were awesome and up my ally for a good suspense. blame it on her. hehehe
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jester81 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2004
Suspence- She must have been talking about my Serial series. I'm still working on the fourth part. I got kind of side tracked with other things....


Serial Part I [link]
Serial Part II [link]
Serial Part III [link]
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silverdruid Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2004
hahaha I thinks thats what she called it. I havent gotten to it either but I am working on it .
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AngelofDemise Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
Thanks Chris, really I do appreciate it, A LOT. Thanks for the phone call too. I've had my cell off b/c I just can't handle hearing from all my friends. It just makes it harder. Thank you for the poem, its beautiful. :hug:
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jester81 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
I understand about not wanting to deal with anything at the moment. Glad you think the poem is beautiful. I... We are going to my brothers house for Thanksgiving. (I'll send you an email)...
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AngelofDemise Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2004
yea i got it
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winterdragon Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
wonderful, wow, great job
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jester81 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
Thanks. :)
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MidStaryNight Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
Awww, you're a very good friend! :hug:


~Olivia~
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JillValentine44 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2004
wow, thats so beautiful! :tear:
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jester81 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2004
I don't think it will help her heal any faster. It's the only thing I know how to do to try and... I don't know. I changed the preview
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