Hmm... aside from the missing arm, the linework's ok. The colors, however, are very nice. They're not too bright and are just well chosen in general. The texturing of the blood elf's skin seems kind of weird though. It's interesting, but it's not conducive to this work as well as it could be, although it looks like you may have just been experimenting with how the pens work. As highlights those textures would be great (such as you have on the hair).
Needs more work but you'll get there. The background is nicely stylish too, I like seeing a background rather than just flat linework to give some perspective or context.