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The Witch of the Black Candy Circus (Prologue?) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 9 (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 6 (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Epilogue (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 22 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 21 (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 20 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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My Bio

My name is Jeremy Burner, but my students know me as Mr. Burner. My passion is and has always been teaching, and story's are my favorite way of doing so. Since God sent Nathan to David in 2 Samuel, stories have been used as an effective means to communicate and reveal truth to those who otherwise would refuse to see that truth. It has always been a dream of mine to tell such stories. To that end I have also taken to learning how to illustrate my own work. An endeavor I have pursued from an early age. If you have come seeking story's, seek no further, If you have come seeking truth, I will do my best, but in the end it is only Christ who holds truth.


Favourite Visual Artist
Christy G
Favourite Movies
How to Train your Dragon, The Greatest Showman, V for Vendetta, The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe
Favourite TV Shows
hellsing, One punch man, Avatar the last air bender, Fullmetal Alchemist
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Reliant K, Tim Hakins, Creed, Steven Curtis Chapman
Favourite Books
Bible, Narnia, Lord of the rings, Case for Christ
Favourite Writers
C.S. Lewis, Tolkien
Favourite Games
Zelda, Metroid, Skyrim, Amnesia the dark decent, and Undertale
Favourite Gaming Platform
PC
Tools of the Trade
Pencil and digital tablet

How is my new prologue to The Witch of the Black Candy Circus?

3 votes
Bad. It spoils too much of the rest of the book and hurts the story
Good. It got me hooked quickly with its ominous foreshadowing
Meh. It didn't really change much and doesn't add anything.
Good. I liked it but I think the other prologue was better.
Bad. It was wasn't interesting or I found it confusing.
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I have finally finished the rewrite of book one. Almost ten years in the making, the book is now in a state which I feel much more satisfied with. Naturally I sped through this rewrite rather quickly and as a result there are a lot of grammar and spelling errors. Naturally it will take a while for me to go through and clean everything up but I would be extreamly grateful for any help offered. For those who would like to comment directly, the official document is linked here. I am also very interested in hearing about any other problems my readers may have noticed. Namely pacing issues, parts of the story that dragged on, or skipped over material you wish I had gone into more detail on, plot holes, or parts you really just did not like. If a particular chapter or scene board you please let me know. I will take no offense and, in fact will thank you. What Next: As stated I will be slowly cleaning up book one. I will now also begin uploading chapters of book two. Hope you are all as
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I am officially finished with the first draft of the rewrite for Book one. I have to say it has been a fun wild ride revisiting The Black Candy Circus, again after all this time. Still a little ways left to go but I can't thank you all enough for the encouragement and help I have received along the way. As you can see, I have the rest all pretty much planned out with release dates for each chapter and everything. I have also summarized all of the main changes that were made to each chapter and included links to those chapters. I still have a lot of work left to do, need to go back and clean up all the changes I just made. Will also need to hire an editor to go through and help me out with wording and grammar. Once I that's all done I will republish and get back to writing Book Two. Hope to see you all there. The Witch Hunter Chronicles: Book 1: The Witch of the Black Candy Circus < Book 2: The Witch's Black Book Book 3: The Witch Hunters and the Sword of Eden Changes I Made So
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I do other forms of artwork, including photo editing and even writing. My rate above still applies. The forms of payment I accept are PayPal, CashApp, or I can even take a card over the phone. Please make all Commission requests by sending me a note. Depending on how busy I am I will get back to you when I can.

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I Hope I Don’t Sound Rude When Saying This Buy, Are You Able to Accept Any Requests?

Depends. Usually I work in trades. Why? what did you have in mind?

Going to need a little more than just a link to go on. Something about a toy brand called littlest pet shop?

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You're welcome! ^^

Thank you very much for the fave! It means a lot to me!)

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I thought you said you wanted to hang out more.


Also super late happy birthday. Sorry I didn't remember it was on the same day as my brother.