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Jeremy-Burner

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Kira VS Columbo (Fan Fic/death battle) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Genisis Project by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Witch of the Black Candy Circus (Prologue?) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 9 (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 6 (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Epilogue (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 22 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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My name is Jeremy Burner, but my students know me as Mr. Burner. My passion is and has always been teaching, and story's are my favorite way of doing so. Since God sent Nathan to David in 2 Samuel, stories have been used as an effective means to communicate and reveal truth to those who otherwise would refuse to see that truth. It has always been a dream of mine to tell such stories. To that end I have also taken to learning how to illustrate my own work. An endeavor I have pursued from an early age. If you have come seeking story's, seek no further, If you have come seeking truth, I will do my best, but in the end it is only Christ who holds truth.


Favourite Visual Artist
Christy G
Favourite Movies
How to Train your Dragon, The Greatest Showman, V for Vendetta, The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe
Favourite TV Shows
hellsing, One punch man, Avatar the last air bender, Fullmetal Alchemist
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Reliant K, Tim Hakins, Creed, Steven Curtis Chapman
Favourite Books
Bible, Narnia, Lord of the rings, Case for Christ
Favourite Writers
C.S. Lewis, Tolkien
Favourite Games
Zelda, Metroid, Skyrim, Amnesia the dark decent, and Undertale
Favourite Gaming Platform
PC
Tools of the Trade
Pencil and digital tablet
Hey everyone 👋 If you enjoy interactive storytelling, roleplaying, or narrative-driven games, I wanted to share something I’ve been having a lot of fun with lately. Infinite Worlds is a virtual AI storytelling platform where you don’t just read a story—you take part in it. You make choices, try things, explore, and the AI reacts dynamically to what you do. I’ve spent a lot of time creating and refining several custom adventures within Infinite Worlds, carefully building the lore, tone, and internal rules so the worlds feel consistent and reactive rather than random. One of the things I really like about the platform is that it treats your actions like a game, not a script. The AI tracks skills and stats in a way that’s similar to tabletop RPGs like D&D, calculates outcomes, and enforces consequences. If you try something risky, there’s a real chance you’ll fail—and if you do, the story doesn’t just brush it off. You have to deal with the aftermath, which makes success feel earned and
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How is my new prologue to The Witch of the Black Candy Circus?

4 votes

Bad. It spoils too much of the rest of the book and hurts the story

Good. It got me hooked quickly with its ominous foreshadowing

Meh. It didn't really change much and doesn't add anything.

Good. I liked it but I think the other prologue was better.

Bad. It was wasn't interesting or I found it confusing.

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I have finally finished the rewrite of book one. Almost ten years in the making, the book is now in a state which I feel much more satisfied with. Naturally I sped through this rewrite rather quickly and as a result there are a lot of grammar and spelling errors. Naturally it will take a while for me to go through and clean everything up but I would be extreamly grateful for any help offered. For those who would like to comment directly, the official document is linked here. I am also very interested in hearing about any other problems my readers may have noticed. Namely pacing issues, parts of the story that dragged on, or skipped over material you wish I had gone into more detail on, plot holes, or parts you really just did not like. If a particular chapter or scene board you please let me know. I will take no offense and, in fact will thank you. What Next: As stated I will be slowly cleaning up book one. I will now also begin uploading chapters of book two. Hope you are all as
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I Hope I Don’t Sound Rude When Saying This Buy, Are You Able to Accept Any Requests?

Depends. Usually I work in trades. Why? what did you have in mind?

https://www.google.ie/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=&ved=2ahUKEwiN4rSI14ODAxUXUkEAHYM3DmIQFnoECDAQAQ&url=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FLittlest_Pet_Shop_(2012_TV_series)&usg=AOvVaw1F-25ikdr1iwwGp9081B6B&opi=89978449

Going  to need a little more than just a link to go on. Something about a toy brand called littlest pet shop?

You're welcome! ^^

Thank you very much for the fave! It means a lot to me!)

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I thought you said you wanted to hang out more.



Also super late happy birthday. Sorry I didn't remember it was on the same day as my brother.