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The Black Candy Circus. Epilogue (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Epilogue (2e) (Rachel)

(You have reached the end. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Thank you for reading) The driver's side door opened. A full grocery bag hung from Steven’s free arm as he climbed inside before shutting the door behind him. “We all ready to go?” He asked, placing the bag in his lap. “You get my apples?” Gabe asked poking his head out from between the two front seats. Whiskers twitching with excitement. Steven responded by reaching into the bag and pulling out two large green apples. “Yus!” he cheered, snatching both treats before once again vanishing into the back seat. Turning I watched as he struggled to make himself comfortable. Despite how big Dad's old truck was, Gabe’s enormous body made the vehicle feel small and cramped by comparison. Once seated, he snarfed down the apples like he hadn’t eaten in days. Earlier the same fate had befallen ten burgers. He was like a bottomless pit. “Get anything for me,” I joked, turning to my boyfriend. He smiled and removed a

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 20 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 20 (2e) (Gabriel)

“Not much left of him, is there?” The words of the ringleader echoed back to me in the darkness. I still remembered how it had felt when the beast tamer ran from me. The thrill as I gave chase and closed in. Even before then, when he was helpless on the stable floor. I hadn't even tried to fight it. Worse I had tried to convince myself he deserved it. I knew she was right? Had known the truth for a while. Soon there would be nothing left. Soon Gabriel would just be the name of a dumb animal. I emerged from the void gasping for air. One second I couldn’t see, move, or even breathe and the next I was suddenly outside in the light again. For hours, I had struggled to pull myself free. The darkness clung to my skin like writhing tentacles made of tar. Then, finally, without warning it pealed away. Utterly exhausted, I collapsed right there. It took everything in me just to remain conscious. Looking back, I could see nothing remained of the darkness. Only torn tent canvas strewn out

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 19 (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 19 (2e) (Rachel)

The next thing I knew I was on the ground in the darkened wood. The trees around me had grown quiet and still. No wind, or bird song or even the sound of insects. Was I really still in the forest? Was I alone? The last thing I remembered was me and my brother running from that thing. I had fallen. Where had it gone? What about Steven and Tony? Gabriel? Warry not to hurt myself or make a sound, I sat up slowly. Wincing from the pain in my head, I scanned the woods around me for any sign or clue of what had happened. It was still very dark, but on the horizon I could just make out a faint warm glow. A distant promise of morning. It was then that I saw him. Just a few feet away from where I sat, the prone form of a tiger lay sprawled near the base of a fallen tree. “GABRIEL!?,” I cried. Jumping to my feet, I ran to my brother's side. Then I saw the blood. My breath stopped in my throat and my legs turned to lead. Suddenly I was eleven years old again. The fire had just

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 18 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 18 (2e) (Gabriel)

I saw the dagger, then everything went red. The next think I knew, I was standing over the body. I couldn’t deny what I had done. The evidence was there for all to see. The weight of it pressed down on me so that I thought it would crush me. I could taste the blood. Feel its warmth. They were watching me. She had seen me. Danger! Not safe. I couldn’t let myself think about it. Couldn’t think. Couldn’t face it. If I let myself, the guilt. I turned to face the enemy. “Gabriel?” her voice came softly. I could feel the judgment and fear. her fear. No, don’t look. Eyes on the enemy. The one responsible for all of this. The chains and cage. Tried to kill her. Made her cry. Made me… No don’t think. Protect. A low rumbled built in my chest, as a growl escaped my lips. The Enemy showed no sign of fear. Only confidence and irritation. Danger. Teeth bared I crouched low and circled to the right away from her. We locked eyes, but the enemy didn’t move. “Gabriel?” she spoke again.

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 17 (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 17 (2e) (Rachel)

A low growl issued forth from behind the front door. The ringleader shut the black book and stood. The abrupt noise and movement after so long in the dark jarred me suddenly to alert like an electric shock. She had been studying that thing diligently for the past hour. After a moment of hesitation. she stepped out from behind her desk, eyeing me accusingly while she made her way to the door. Pulling it open, I could see the two snow leopards hadn't moved from their posts. “What is it?,” she asked the cats. One of them growled again, and, for an insane moment, I could have sworn I heard it speak. If it was words I was hearing, it was in a language that was so low and guttural it was almost indistinguishable from the animals normal sounds. Hearing it made the hairs on the back of my neck and arms stand on end. “What!?,” the ringleader hissed angrily, before storming back over to the cupboard. Reaching in she produced the crystal ball from earlier. Clutching it tightly in her

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 16 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 16 (2e) (Gabriel)

“I should probably finish bandaging you up first,” Steve commented, looking me over with concern. “Your burns are mostly first and second degree but the area between your shoulder blades and neck are a different story. Your not going to need grafts or anything but, they could still get infected.” “It will have to happen later," I insisted impatiently. “Also, we’re on borrowed time as is, so walk and talk,” I pushed past him to the door. He hesitated. “Fine, later,” he agreed reluctantly. Reaching up, he held the door open as we both passed through. Stevens trailer was located just outside the main tent, closer to the front entrance, but a bit further away from the tent itself than usual. The circus itself stood in the center of a large open field, bordered by a rather dense looking forest. Outside, without my collar. I honestly felt a little naked. More then normal anyway. Stepping onto the cool evening grass, it was strange to think that, if I wanted, I could run out into

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 15 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 15 (2e) (Gabriel)

Broken as I was, the pain was surprisingly distant. My thoughts moved languidly through my head as I focused mainly on just breathing. Right when I thought life couldn’t possibly go any further south. If I had the strength, I think, I would have laughed at the irony of it all. A part of me wondered if Candy would be upset if I died? Probobly. I would love to see the look on her face if I did. I hoped Rachel was ok. I don’t know how long I lay there on her stage. Before I finally blacked out. Before consciousness finally found me again. Eventually though, it did find me. I could feel the cold of the stainless steel table beneath me and the warmth of the powerful lights above. Not daring to move, I blinking. Looking around, It didn’t take much brain power for me to realize I was in the veterinary trailer. The good doctor was leaned over me, applying something cold and tingly to my back. I noticed he was wearing surgical gear. Surprisingly, the pain wasn’t that bad. Whatever he

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 14 (2e) (Rachel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 14 (2e) (Rachel)

“You may go.” Candy said, dismissing Tiphany from the room. With a nod the ticket lady left. As the door closed behind her, I could still see the snow leopards standing guard on either side of the door. “Well, this certainly complicates things,” The ringleader complained, now turning her attention to me. She took a seat behind her desk, reclined comfortably, like a judge or queen preparing to pass down her verdict on the accused. “But in a way, it was inevitable, I suppose. Considering what you are.” I was prevented from responding by the length of red towel wrapped around the back of my head and across my mouth. I sat on the floor in the corner of her trailer, arms fastened tightly behind my back. After a brief moment of silent contemplation the ringleader once again stood, walked over to where I sat, and removed the gag. “Please, let me and my brother go. I’ll give you whatever you want. You know I can pay. Whatever trouble I have caused, I am clearly not worth

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 13 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 13 (2e) (Gabriel)

Back and forth, back and forth. A minute passed, then an hour, while I paced the length of my cage. What was Rachel thinking? How could she agree to go out with that monster? She clearly had no interest in the guy. She had to know he couldn’t be trusted. What had he meant about her and the doc not being a thing anymore? Had they broken up? Was that why she was upset? What about Texas? Did this mean we weren’t leaving the circus? So many thoughts and questions flowing through my head. Is she not coming tonight? With a frustrated growl I stalked over to my water bucket for a drink, trying my best to ignore the animal staring back at me from my reflection. Thirst sated I turned and hoped up into my hammock. What ever her plan was, I just hope that Rachel doesn’t get herself into trouble. No matter what I did, my thoughts kept drifting back to Rachel and the endless unanswerable questions. They gnawed at me like a bunch of biting insects. I awoke suddenly before I even realized I

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My name is Jeremy Burner, but my students know me as Mr. Burner. My passion is and has always been teaching, and story's are my favorite way of doing so. Since God sent Nathan to David in 2 Samuel, stories have been used as an effective means to communicate and reveal truth to those who otherwise would refuse to see that truth. It has always been a dream of mine to tell such stories. To that end I have also taken to learning how to illustrate my own work. An endeavor I have pursued from an early age. If you have come seeking story's, seek no further, If you have come seeking truth, I will do my best, but in the end it is only Christ who holds truth.

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Christy G

Favourite Movies

How to Train your Dragon, The Greatest Showman, V for Vendetta, The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe

Favourite TV Shows

hellsing, One punch man, Avatar the last air bender, Fullmetal Alchemist

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists

Reliant K, Tim Hakins, Creed, Steven Curtis Chapman

Favourite Books

Bible, Narnia, Lord of the rings, Case for Christ

Favourite Writers

C.S. Lewis, Tolkien

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Zelda, Metroid, Skyrim, Amnesia the dark decent, and Undertale

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Jeremy-Burner

Aug 20, 2022

Its Done. Finally.

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I have finally finished the rewrite of book one. Almost ten years in the making, the book is now in a state which I feel much more satisfied with. Naturally I sped through this rewrite rather quickly and as a result there are a lot of grammar and spelling errors. Naturally it will take a while for me to go through and clean everything up but I would be extreamly grateful for any help offered. For those who would like to comment directly, the official document is linked here. I am also very interested in hearing about any other problems my readers may have noticed. Namely pacing issues, parts of the story that dragged on, or skipped over material you wish I had gone into more detail on, plot holes, or parts you really just did not like. If a particular chapter or scene board you please let me know. I will take no offense and, in fact will thank you. What Next: As stated I will be slowly cleaning up book one. I will now also begin uploading chapters of book two. Hope you are all as

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Jeremy-Burner

Jul 10, 2022

Updates, Feedback + Dates -The Black Candy Circus

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I am officially finished with the first draft of the rewrite for Book one. I have to say it has been a fun wild ride revisiting The Black Candy Circus, again after all this time. Still a little ways left to go but I can't thank you all enough for the encouragement and help I have received along the way. As you can see, I have the rest all pretty much planned out with release dates for each chapter and everything. I have also summarized all of the main changes that were made to each chapter and included links to those chapters. I still have a lot of work left to do, need to go back and clean up all the changes I just made. Will also need to hire an editor to go through and help me out with wording and grammar. Once I that's all done I will republish and get back to writing Book Two. Hope to see you all there. The Witch Hunter Chronicles: Book 1: The Witch of the Black Candy Circus < Book 2: The Witch's Black Book Book 3: The Witch Hunters and the Sword of Eden Changes I Made So

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Jeremy-Burner

Jul 6, 2022

Updating the Update

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So as of tomorrow I will be updating chapters 1-14. As I have been writing, I have been getting wonderful feedback from you the community and I have been taking notes. Recently I went through and applied all those notes to the master google doc and now I just need to copy all those changes here in DA. That will happen tomorrow. Just a heads up but there have been a few minor plot changes and adjustments here and there as well as a few extra details added along the way. I had a particularly fun time with chapter 4. Also, yes. As of today I have finished editing chapter 14. If you want to read that now you can click the link to my google doc here. Still need to make a title card for it but that is already comming together. Chapter 15 will also likely be finished tomorrow also, so expect that to come out a little later this week. Anyway, thanks for all the feedback and help I have been getting along the way. A special shout out to Bruno-Bluthgeld. Your partnership has been a literal