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Witches by jeremystery, literature

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Witches

Deep in the darkest woods you will find them where their black magic and evil desires bind them 4 black hats spin around a fire as they toss each ingredient into the pyre to its brim it bubbles with bloody fingers and scum for indeed the witch's cauldron was filled up with cum! putrid pusses and fresh infestations black oath blood spilled for the flesh incantations My name's harry mason and I'm in town on vacation! I came in the cauldron with one great ejaculation.

Castaway Castaway by jeremystery, literature

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Castaway Castaway

to find a place that I can stay grey eyes fix upon the shore dusty clouds and dark waves swim across the ocean floor here I am lingering nasty creature of the deep in the shallows wandering for a place that I can keep poison tendrils chasing prey turning pebbles, frantic reaching sick of flesh, I wish to play find me at the surface breaching But that is not what I’ve been feeling suspended motion, I feel I’m sinking I find my feelings all are fleeting Is there an answer I’ve been seeking Or have I always been here wading? soon my breathing turns to bleeding I have always been here waiting In the jaws of fate my heart is beating

Regret by jeremystery, literature

Little Big Bang Hole by jeremystery, literature

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Little Big Bang Hole

Has and hasn't happened Is and isn't One in all All in one Time is unbegan and ended Zoom out enough then through relativety everything can be considered immensely compact Zoom in enough then everything is vastly separate Boundaries are arbitrary The world/ life is about the something, Not the nothing or the everything The something is where things happen Its the beauty and the ugly and the love and the hate Music and art all celebrate the unique blending and interaction between different shapes or colors or notes or instruments. Its the stuff that makes the world Interesting Ultimate concepts like all or none are both boring There's

Tiger Crossing by jeremystery, literature

Black Rose by jeremystery, literature

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Black Rose

So you trampled my heart With your black parade Now you will feel my blade 1000 needles run up my arm And blood runs down my face Hey girl, you broke my fucking heart You crumpled it up Right from the start I'm hyper hella crazy, you got me stupid fucking dizzy Running circles in my brain, my mind is a disgrace You are a disney girl I was your green day guy Now I'm a fucking demon with bright red eyes!

Wading by jeremystery, literature

Angry Little Italian Man by jeremystery, literature

Try by jeremystery, literature

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Try

You’re at your place So draw a breath Make a face Evade your death You’ve gone too fast To claim your past As your own What has it shown? Feed your fate Clear your plate Try again Tell me who you are Just another thing you opened The pieces of you that remain broken The parts of you that do not show That in your careless ways They do not grow They tell you that you have to try so Tell me what I need to know Tell me who you are All the things you’d love to see Sit in museums and in trees You sit behind an empty screen You fill your home with history Your future fixes splintered dreams Supporting your

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Witches by jeremystery, literature

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Castaway Castaway by jeremystery, literature

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Castaway Castaway

Regret by jeremystery, literature

Little Big Bang Hole by jeremystery, literature

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Little Big Bang Hole

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Black Rose

Wading by jeremystery, literature

Angry Little Italian Man by jeremystery, literature

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Jul 5, 2012

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DeviantART critiques are one of the stupidest features on this site.  The fact that anyone can post a review already ensures that there will be a multitude of unprofessional critiques riddled with poor analyses.  It also means that there will be many critiques where the poster is just a gushing fan of the work or is an individual seeking attention.  Critiques are supposed to help the artist decipher the flaws and strengths of their own work.  They are supposed to be done by professionals or someone with at least the same artistic abilities, experience, or knowledge.  In the critiques I have seen, I have yet to see a post that appeared both pr