Sparring Session

My contest entry.

Gah! I've questioned upping this because after I got halfway into it I realized it may not make sense to many people. This is why I'm an artist and not a writer. Well, I argued with myself over it long enough to put a real delay on my productivity, but I finally said screw it and decided since I've put this much time into it already and I'm wasting more debating it I might as well. I'll go on to color this, but again it feels like a bit of a waste when the damn thing might not work. Grrrr, I'm babbling, but I'd appreciate opinions or critiques please.

Oh! In case any of you eagle-eyed old farts find yourself recognizing this it's because it was inspired by the spar that Sonic and Sally had at the beginning of Sally Quest waaayyyyyy back in the yesteryears of the comic.

EDIT: Now larger, and in COLOR!!!

EXTRA EDIT: I WON!! I WON!! Thank you, thank you, thank you to everyone that supported/voted for me!