So, what does everyone think of the dialogue on this page? I hope I did well. I know Annie loved the fact she could put in the shark character from Spongebob, so I'm glad.
Otherwise, not my favorite dialogue I wrote for this. I wasn't as in love with it as I was the original dialogue I wrote (I was confused and thought Rufus was the mole rat from Kim Possible - that was a VERY different and hilarious first draft of this script's dialogue on this page, by the way). I LOVE Max's dialogue in the fifth panel, though. Definitely a highlight for me.
Annie's artwork does great wonders for my script this page!
Loving the way Sam looks in panel 6. And that nerdy shark from Spongebob - awesome!