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Hidden Memories
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Published: September 4, 2003
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One of the full-page spreads for my manga If I Fell. This is a part where Gabriel is remembering his time with Lucifer before he fell. I think it's purty, though I'm not too happy with the lines.
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fallnangeltearsProfessional General Artist
awww!!! such beautiful expressions!!
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hexocainHobbyist General Artist
It is purty, has a tender mood. The lines could use some completion, for instance on the necks and Lucifer's jaw - because I'm assuming that Lucifer is the one with the black hair? I like the lines of their eyes and eyebrows almost mimicking each other, but turned in different ways, like the happy/sad faces at a theatre. The background doesn't seem to fit in, it looks like bubbles from a lavalamp. :O_o: And I think you should either blur the top or leave the image un-blurred. ;)
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Thanks for the comment, the criticisms have been duly noted. Keeping in mind the age of this deviation, most of the improvements re: the bizarre blurring have been fixed, however I did leave some of the lines uncompleted for personal interpretation reasons. But seriously, though, thanks. Detailed comments roX0rZ! XD
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Gleh! Very sw33t.....Yaoi r0x0rs! (Blasphemy is one of my favorite words!)
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Yay! my first comment on this piece ^__^ Danke schoen verreh verreh much xD
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You're so welcome. ^^
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