One of the full-page spreads for my manga If I Fell. This is a part where Gabriel is remembering his time with Lucifer before he fell. I think it's purty, though I'm not too happy with the lines.
awww!!! such beautiful expressions!!
It is purty, has a tender mood. The lines could use some completion, for instance on the necks and Lucifer's jaw - because I'm assuming that Lucifer is the one with the black hair? I like the lines of their eyes and eyebrows almost mimicking each other, but turned in different ways, like the happy/sad faces at a theatre. The background doesn't seem to fit in, it looks like bubbles from a lavalamp. And I think you should either blur the top or leave the image un-blurred.
Thanks for the comment, the criticisms have been duly noted. Keeping in mind the age of this deviation, most of the improvements re: the bizarre blurring have been fixed, however I did leave some of the lines uncompleted for personal interpretation reasons. But seriously, though, thanks. Detailed comments roX0rZ! XD
Gleh! Very sw33t.....Yaoi r0x0rs! (Blasphemy is one of my favorite words!)