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Deep beneath the Ocean, where the fish swim and the crabs crawl, A beautiful mermaid of 21 years of age was swimming through the water. Her name was Zoey. She had long orange hair, lovely green eyes, a black fish tail and black sea shell bra along with nice sized breasts and a nicely built body.
She was making her way to an underwater cave where it has been rumoured to be the home of a giant octopus. All merfolk stay away from the giant octopus because everyone knows that this octopus has been known to kidnap young mermaids and keep them for his slaves.
Zoey wanted to know if the rumours were true so she went to see the cave for herself. After two hours of swimming, Zoey finally arrived at the supposed cave of the giant octopus.
Zoey was nervous at first. But, after summoning all her courage, she put her hands around her mouth and yelled into the cave as loud as she could saying "HELLO! ANYBODY HOME?"
A second later, Zoey heard a growling sound coming from the cave. Zoey was starting to get more nervous as the growling got louder and louder with every passing moment. Suddenly, two big red eyes appeared in the shadowy entrance of the cave as two long black tentacles came slithering out of the entrance.
"Who are you, and what are you doing here?" Asked the octopus in a booming, intimidating voice from the cave, as the tentacles waved in the water.
Zoey didn't know what to say. She had never spoken to an octopus before. Especially a giant one that was concealed in shadows.
"M-m-my name is-s-s." Was all Zoey could say.
"Speak up Mermaid." Ordered the octopus, "I don't have all day."
Once again, Zoey summoned all of her courage and said bravely, "My name is Zoey and I came here to offer myself as your Slave."
The octopus couldn't believe this. A mermaid was actually offering to be his slave.
"Why do you want to be my slave?" Asked the octopus suspiciously.
"You see, I've heard stories about you kidnapping mermaids and making them your slaves." Replied Zoey, "Are they true?"
"Yes." Answered the octopus, "But they eventually escaped."
"Oh I see." Said Zoey, surprised that the octopus's slaves were lucky enough to escape from him, "Anyway, As I learned more about you, I have decided to have you be my master."
This last comment surprised the octopus even more. A mermaid was really willing to be his slave.
"Why do you want to be my slave?" Asked the octopus.
"You see All my live I wanted to be a slave but none of the Merboys will make me their slave." Zoey replied sadly, "So please let me be your slave. Please, oh please. I'll be a good slave to you. I'll clean the cave everyday, I'll cook your meals, I'll stay with you forever."
The octopus could see that Zoey's eyes were filling up with tears. The octopus did some thinking and eventually came up with an Idea for the Mermaid to prove herself worthy of being his slave.
"Very well, I'll take you for my slave."  Said the octopus finally.
"Oh, thank you." Replied Zoey, as she wiped the tears from her eyes.
"But first, you must prove youself worthy of being my slave." Said the octopus.
"I'll do anything." Said Zoey. She was eager to stay with the octopus for the rest of her life.
"Go to the graveyard of human ships," Started the Octopus, "Look for a ship with a black flag that has a golden dragon on it. Inside the ship, you will find a black box that holds a black crystal. Bring it to me and I will take you for my slave."
"I know where the graveyard is." Said Zoey happily, "And I know of the ship you speak of. I'll go there at once and I shall not return without the crystal my master."
"Be warned my slave to be," Said the Octopus, "The graveyard is home to many sharks."
"Don't worry, I'll be fine." Replied Zoey sounding confident.
And so, Zoey bowed to her future master and started swimming towards the graveyard of ships. After swimming for another two hours, Zoey arrived at the graveyard of ships. It was filled with ships from different countries on the surface world. It only took Zoey 20 minutes to find the ship with the black flag containing a picture of a golden dragon on it.
"Now, all I have to do is get that box with the crystal and take it back to my master and then I'll be his to command forever." Zoey thought to herself, as she swam through a hole in the side of the ship.
Zoey searched the entire ship for the box but so far she hadn't had any luck finding it. Finally she found it on an old table in the captain's quarters. Zoey quickly swam up to the table and picked it up. She then opened the box to see it definitely had the black crystal she was told about.
"It's beautiful." Zoey thought to herself as she closed the box, "My master will be sure to like this."
Just as Zoey made her way to the door, she heard a growling sound coming from behind her. When she turned to see what had made the growl, She saw a big gray shark had seen her through the window.
Zoey let out a loud scream as she swam for live while still holding the box. The Shark crashed through the window and followed Zoey through the door. Zoey swam through the same hole she entered earlier with the shark in hot pursuit. Lucky, Zoey spotted an anchor on the sea floor and speed toward it. Fortunately, Zoey was able to fit through the ring on the top of the anchor. Although, the shark wasn't as fortunate, for he got himself stuck in the ring.
With the Shark out of the way, Zoey started to swim back toward the octopus's cave. Two hours later, Zoey returned to the octopus's cave.
Once again, Zoey shouted into the cave saying "I'M BACK MASTER AND I HAVE THE CRYSTAL YOU ASKED FOR."
A second later, the same red eyes and black tentacles appeared in the cave entrance.
"Show me the crystal, so I can be sure you have succeeded." demanded the octopus.
"As you wish master." Replied Zoey as she opened the box to show her master the crystal.
The octopus's eye's widened as he beheld the crystal and saw how beautify it was.
"Do you like it master?" Asked Zoey as she closed the box and held it out to the octopus.
"Indeed I do." Replied the octopus as he used his left tentacle to take the box from Zoey's hands, "You have proven yourself worthy of being my slave."
"Oh thank you master, thank you." Said Zoey happily.
Before another word could be said, The octopus wrapped his right tentacle around Zoey's waist, pinning her arms to the side of her body in the process.
"Do you like being wrapped in my tentacles Zoey?" Asked the octopus, as he got a good grip on the brave mermaid.
"Oh, yes master." Replied Zoey dreamily, "I love the feel of your suction cups on my skin."
And so with that, the octopus started to go back into the cave, pulling Zoey and the box in with him.
"At last, I'll finally be with my one true master." Zoey thought to herself as she disappeared into the shadowy cave.
Once Inside the cave, Zoey saw that the Octopus was bigger than she imagined. His whole body was black and he had eight long tentacles six of which were waving in the water.
"Do you mind if I squeeze and stroke your body my dear?" Asked the octopus as he put the black box on a nearby rock.
"I don't mind at all master help yourself." Replied Zoey happily.
And so with that, the octopus wrapped another tentacle around Zoey and then started squeezing her body a little along with the tentacle already around her body. A second later he started using two other tentacles to stroke her body gently.
"Do you like that my dear?" Asked the octopus.
"Oh, yes master it feels great." Replied Zoey happily.
Zoey knew that this was the beginning of her new life with her Octopus master.
Here is my latest story featuring my original character zoey. This story is based on a suggestion by Enducer 51. The scene with the shark is similar to the one from the Little mermaid.
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RD-327 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017
My story should be up this weekend.  And then I need a favor.
Jayko-15 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017
Good and what’s your favour?
RD-327 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2017
I'll tell you later.
Jayko-15 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2017
RD-327 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2017
It's done.
Jayko-15 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2017
Sweet :)
RD-327 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017
Do you mind if I write a sequel story for this setting?
Jayko-15 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017
not at all.
RD-327 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017
Thank you.  It'll be a awhile, but I think you'll like it.
Jayko-15 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017
I've added you to my watch list that way I'll know when it's finished.
Enducer51 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
This is great! My only concern would be that it could be more intimate.
Jayko-15 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
How do you suggest I make it more intimate?
RD-327 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
I think he means something like the Octopus could strip off Zoey's bra and fondle her breasts, maybe give them a squeeze.
Jayko-15 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017
I don't do that sort of stuff.
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