Just to update everyone (that being my few watchers and friends, but that's all the everyone I need anyway), I haven't forgotten about my story, and will be coming back to it. In fact, I have finally found time to finish reading a book on storytelling, and have come to a very important conclusion: The chapters presented thus far will need to be rewritten.
The reason for this is because I made a large error, which you are probably unaware of, yet I feel the need to share none the less. The doctor, the villain which many people keep telling me they like, and can't wait to see more of, was originally designed as a throw away character. The
Yes, as the title suggests, I am going away for a while, at least in one sence. There will not be any further chapters of my story released for a little while. This is due, mostly, to my realization that I had gotten my cart before the horse; in that I had yet to finish the roleplay that the story is based upon. =p Silly me.
That is only part of it. I also want to take some time to learn to write a bit better. I've gotten some constructive critisizm from some friends, and am already working on improving my style. That, coupled with lots of yardwork may keep me away for a while, but rest assured, I think about this story every day, and
Hello, and welcome to my little corner of Devart. Here I hope to do what most devartists do: post there art. That aside, Let me tell you a touch about myself. Due to things I won'tt go into here, I'm somewhat shocially anxious. Heck, I am having to practically force myself to write this right now. =/ I'm also somewhat overweight, but I am neither unhealthy, nor a slob. Working a small farm keeps that in check. Currently I am trying to get myself back in school, as I want to work in computer repair. I love repairing things, not just computers. I always have, actually, I took my first electronic toy apart and repaired it at 5. Just