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Wolverine by javi-ure Wolverine by javi-ure
Well, this one is for my portfolio so I need some feedback. I'm not very happy with it so tell me what you think.

Zbrush and a lot of PS.

Enjoy
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Xenofa Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing job!!! it's so real! I need to practice more ;)
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!!
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Xenofa Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're very very welcome! you deserve it! *v*
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AmaraTheHedgehog Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love your work! how do you get them to be so realistic?
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Good references a looooooooooot of work!!!! practice, practice, practice...
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AmaraTheHedgehog Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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MarcMons007 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Muy guapo
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LJ-Phillips Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Professional
I think it's brilliant :) There's a sense of barely contained rage and menace which I like - it's the moment before he unleashes his berserker fury-
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Solubrious Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012
Dude, this is cool. I like it a lot. An instant fave. Idk why you don't like it but I think its really cool.
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!:)
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Solubrious Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
For sure, mate! Good work. Keep it up
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
;)
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RodolfoRubens Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Student Artist
Nice choice with the characteer, nice choice with the theme, masterpiece ...
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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RodolfoRubens Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student Artist
welcome!
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PutYourBraveFaceOn Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
You were featured here: [link] . :peace:
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very very much! I really apreciate it
:)
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3Dave Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011
Great composition! I like the pose and the concept. I knew those were laser sights on him, but I would tone down the beams, and brighten the spots on his skin. The dots usually show up very bright red, almost orange - they sort of glow. Also, the angles of the beams are a bit extreme for the ones on the left. The lowest one seems like a guy would have to be lying down on the ground that is lower than the character is, and the highest one makes it seem like the other shooter would have to be in a tree or something. The area around the triceps looks a little funny. I don't think it is quite correct.

One thing that I think would make this picture even more powerful would be if his eyes were looking in the direction behind him, like in the general direction of the camera. Just my opinion about the eyes.

Really great work all around. Great scene!


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javi-ure Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for the comment Dave. I really apreciate it.
That's what I was thinking about the laser beams, a group of hunters stalking Wolvie, hiding inside the forest (trees, ground, everywhere...)
I have to fix some parts of the drawings...
Thanks mate!
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3Dave Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011
You're very welcome. :bounce: It was hard to see, but I thought I may have seen some trees in the background.
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Strajho Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
2 thumb up for this one..:D
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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lijohn321 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
TTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS IIIISSSS AAAAAAAWWEEESSSOOOMMMMEEE!!!!!
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
hahaha! Thanks mate!
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lijohn321 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
no problem....
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nachoriesco Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
El triceps esta algo plano, le falta volumen, no crees? y quizas oscureciendolo todo un poco mas para que resalten mas los laser...transmitiria mejor la idea de la ilustracion...
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Al tener el brazo doblado el triceps no tiene porque resaltar mucho, pero tengo en cuenta tu comentario. En vez de oscurecer la ilustración voy a subir el tono a los laseres.
Muchas gracias por el cometario Nacho!
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nachoriesco Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Si, estoy de acuerdo, aunque esa zona parece demasiado plana, nose...Me referia a oscurecer el fondo asi al subir los laser se notara el doble..
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swyattart Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Great image (I agree with some of the previous comments, I think it is the angle of the claws on the right hand) I'm sure you could adjust it). Great work.
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I'll fix it for sure...
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illahstrait Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
looks nice jav
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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gordeenhooow Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Very nice, man!
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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gordeenhooow Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome.
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Fennewalde Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
awesome work man!

Maybe something to check out: The claws aren't on the same plane as the top of his hand. Right now, they are leaning too much to his left (if we assume that, palm on a table, the claws would lean more to the left). Also, the sniper lines could use more glow.

But really, the picture is awesome. those are nitpicks because you said you were unhappy with it.
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Mmmmmm... maybe it's an image effect. When I sculpted it, the claws were in its place... maybe when I posed it they moved a bit... I'll check it out ...
Thanks a lot!
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precinctomega Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
Very good work with the zBrush. A couple of things occur to me if you're looking for constructive criticism. First, with respect to the character, I'm pretty sure he should be hairier, especially on his back, but that's a little thing. I'm not sure what's going on with the metallic bits in his flesh. I assume they're some sort of socket, relating to Wolverine's "Weapon X" past, but that's not entirely clear. Again, little thing, probably no big deal. The last thing is fractionally more significant: the curl of his mouth. When working in a comic book style, obviously one can play about with the limitations of anatomy. But you're working in photorealist style (and doing it very well, I might add - I just love the attention to detail on the musculature!) and having a mouth in a position that just isn't physically possible with a human facial musculature lets the picture down a wee bit.

Don't get me wrong. I love the pic. If I didn't, I wouldn't be following you and wouldn't bother to comment. But as it's a portfolio piece, I thought you might want the feedback.
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot, mate! I really apreciate your comments. You are right about the mouth, I exagerated it a bit to give him a more animal appearance, but maybe it's too much. The back holes are bullet holes :( (to clarify it, I added laser sights on his back)... I see I'm not very succesful on this part...
Anyway, thanks a lot for your comments, it's great to have this kind of critics.
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daddyconnolly Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011
very good.
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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angelitoon Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Muy guapo ese lobezno!
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Gracias Ángel!
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angelitoon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:)
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dragonshuffle Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Epic ^_^
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javi-ure Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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