I quite obviously liked how it is going, so I might continue on for another... Three chapters?
How do you guys feel about this?
If I go over my Sta.sh gb's I'll leave a link to my Wattpad where you can read the rest if you're super interested in it.
El's point of view
El turned a corner, seeing a glowing, gooey substance. It was a gate. She stepped forward, putting her hand through. She was going through! 'Mike! I can see Mike!' She thought. She fell out. She was in the middle of Mike's school, when school was open. "Mike..." She said limply. Kids gathered around her, murmuring. She heard whispers of "What the hell is that?" and "Isn't that Mike's girlfriend or something?"
She glanced around, hoping to see Mike. But she saw only a teacher rushing over. "What in the name of--" He stopped. El recognized him. It was Mr. Clark. "Weren't you... Ah, whatever, let's get you to the nurse's office to clean you up and make sure you're okay--" He w