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A Carnival Scene by jasonksmith A Carnival Scene by jasonksmith
The Gibralter Trade Center Carnival in Taylor, MI. I don't know if this should be here or in art photography. I chose here because I was photographing people during a public event, even though I think the photograph is very artistic in nature. I guess it could go both ways.

I'm not sure if this photograph is good by common black and white standards. I'm new to non-point-and-shoot photography, let alone the techniques of good digital black and white photography. There was lots of burning and dodging on my part, but I'm not sure if I did a good job.

This is the first peice that I am actually torn about whether or not it is suitable to be a finished peice or just a scrap....
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BatGirl---x Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2008   Photographer
If you tilted the camera up a little tiny bit more it'd be perfect :)
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GoldenEyeKnuckles Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, Gibralter Trade center carnival, I always loved that. You can find anything there!
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devouredex Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2006
cool piece, i love the angle, what i will say is i think the activities need to be more spaced out instead of more towards one corner, the right side seems to be some what abandoned, it could actually look good also if you did a version in colour, say around sunset, add a bit more desire and happyness to the piece, the bluriness of some of the people adds a sense of motion, that should definatly be kept, tis a great effect, but i have to say this is a great piece, im impressed :D
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jasonksmith Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much!
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devouredex Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2006
your welcome :D
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