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Drawn Chain Bridge - Széchenyi Lánchíd with lion's statue on it, behind Parliament and Danube river. [link]
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Image details
Image size
1000x1279px 399.35 KB
Make
FUJIFILM
Model
Fujifilm A220 A230
Shutter Speed
1/45 second
Aperture
F/2.9
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
250
Date Taken
Aug 27, 2011, 5:38:32 PM
Sensor Size
3mm
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CaroleHumphreys's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Hi Jasmina. Sorry for the delay, but here, at long last, is your critique on behalf of :gevGraphite-Gods: (as previously requested).

Firstly, there is a slight blurriness to the image which makes me wonder if the image has a low DPI, or is it's a little out of focus. The softness does not detract too much from your atmospheric drawing, and certainly it works in showing the distance of the cathedral. I like that you've not become too detailed with the cathedral and it recedes well into the background and looks very believable.

The water looks a little grey and flat and might be helped by working the reflections a bit more, picking out some bright highlights and adding some selective darks to it. I can see you have added rippling waves, but this detail has become a bit lost (it might be that the camera did not pick up on this detail).

I like the shading on the plinth, it conveys a strong sense of the direction of the light and and where shadow falls. The perspective is convincing and it has a lovely solid feel. I find the lion interesting - it appears to have been completed essentially im three sets of tone, dark, light and a middle range tone. It's been depicted in a simplistic, non-fussy way which again helps us to perceive it to be solid and sculpted, and made of stone (rather than a realistic animal). It works, despite the blurriness. The dark shadow on the lower face is most pleasing.

Your drawing has a strong sense of place and captures the feeling of distance well, it's a most accomplished drawing.
JasminaSusak's avatar
Thanks a lot :hug: for such a nice words and for your time :heart:
Your critique means a lot :)
CaroleHumphreys's avatar
You're most welcome :) :hug:
ElRinaZuza's avatar
I love this kind of critique. I love when the text is well-organized!
CaroleHumphreys's avatar
Thank you. Some critiques are a real pleasure to do :)
ElRinaZuza's avatar
I know what you're saying about, my friend-critic!
CaroleHumphreys's avatar
Oops! That should have read on behalf of #Graphite-Gods
philippeL's avatar
Beautiful drawing :heart:
JasminaSusak's avatar
Thanks :woohoo: Have you ever visited Budapest?
philippeL's avatar
Not at all, it seems to be a very beautiful city.
JasminaSusak's avatar
Köszi :heart: A favot is :woohoo:
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In the featured folder nº 3 in Special-Groups. (Best works!).


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wow amazing job!!!
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JasminaSusak's avatar
Thanks :heart: I was in doubt for so many months, whether to upload or not :)
Tiger-in-my-veins's avatar
Really?

Oh no, i think it looks really nice.

Upload all u have lol :D

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