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Liberty Soul Silver Nuzlocke Ch 17-8

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Published: November 24, 2019
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A reveal of who might behind this...

EDIT: Changed how I indicate whispers.


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Dingopox's avatar
DingopoxHobbyist Digital Artist
Eeeeh, love that you're including Ariana!
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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
I'm glad! I enjoy pretty much all of the Team Rocket Admins.
Ryua's avatar
RyuaHobbyist General Artist
What? The Champion shows up at exactly the right moment? What craziness is this!
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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
It's almost as if someone is controlling the events of this story and making sure certain characters are in the right place at the right time...!
Ryua's avatar
RyuaHobbyist General Artist
*gasp* The conspiracy deepens!
Velink's avatar
VelinkHobbyist
too bad for you, lady, that Drgaonite must have realized your appearance from your perfume
or killing intent!
you expected Lance, but it is general Kenobi
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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
Haha!
Just-A-Log's avatar
I feel like Lance was just circling, waiting to just swoop in with a "I AM HERE!" if things seemed to go south to get credit.
jadethestone's avatar
jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
More or less. He's a bit of a show-off, but not a glory-hog. He's there in case Jade needed help.
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JoshtheOverlanderHobbyist General Artist
I'm getting Pokemon Adventures vibes here. Team Rocket experimenting with Pokemon, like the Eevee that could swap evolutionary forms on the fly.
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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
I will say that I have always enjoyed the old Pokemon Adventures comics...
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CreepypastaScream17Student Traditional Artist
Lance we know it’s you stop letting panels cover your face everywhere.
Also I think the whispers are fine, but take the opinion of everyone else if you don’t feel comfortable with those brackets.
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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
Haha, he just likes being dramatic XD
I think I'll fix how I indicate whispers
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CreepypastaScream17Student Traditional Artist
Sounds good... Oh sorry

<Sounds good.>
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JohnnyNuzlockeHobbyist Digital Artist
Oh she's hear. You sure you're the Interim Boss? Hmmmmmmmmmmmm
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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
*shrugs*
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KrisantyneHobbyist Digital Artist
The angle in the last panel is so nice!!

To be honest, the <> indicating whispering was completely incomprehensible to me, so may I offer some advice? The traditional way of indicating whispering is to make the outline of the speech bubble dashed, like this: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Speech_b… I haven't read many different officially published comics in my life, but that's what it was like in all the ones I have seen.
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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
Thanks a bunch! Perspective is challenging.

I fixed how I indicated whipsering. I've actually done it that way before in previous pages. I don't know why I didn't just do it again. Must've slipped my mind. Thanks though, this works much better.
Songal's avatar
Hehe what great plot thickening!
MasalaniousChaideas's avatar

Nice try, Ariana. That little girl's got a counter for every one of your 'Mons. But sure, just blame it on Lance that you can't win.

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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
I don't know... even with type counters, Ariana is a pretty dangerous trainer...
Rixec2's avatar
Fortunate for Jade that Lance showed up. Perhaps this shall be what helps set lance on Team Rocket's trail going forward. Now the question is if they can keep the radio transmitter or if Ariana can sneakily steal it back without having to battle or be exposed. 
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jadethestoneHobbyist General Artist
Very fortunate for Jade that Lance was around.
But we shall see...
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