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Hinata PinUp - FINISHED by jadeedge Hinata PinUp - FINISHED by jadeedge
yeah... i'm done.

added highlights and color. made the metal look more like ice-y.
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It's a very beautiful picture, and I love it a lot, but this IS a critique so I'll be fair and say what I think. I somehow feel I don't really have a right to though, since my own work isn't so good and I have the same troubles this piece reflects...and more! I hope this is accurate and helpful.

The lighting is off, and her one hand looks a little wonky. Her face seems flat, but that might just be your style. Her head in proportion to the rest of her body seems a tad too small. The colors mesh wonderfully and the snow looks really nice.

I saw the newer version of this picture too, very well done. It's a really nice piece, and the redone version shows how much you've grown as an artist. Job well done! :D
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:iconninjaboy240:
ninjaboy240 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
GOD DAMM!!!!! HOW AM I FINDING THIS JUST NOW!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconromiette33:
romiette33 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
She so cute


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Naruto-Sakura=NaruSaku
Naruto+Hinata=Naruhina (Soulmate Forever ^_^)

I hope you all die :fork: (Sorry that was my evil side ;3)
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jakob-the-dragon-boy Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
Awesome, i personally liked Hinata's pre-time skip hair better but her pre time skip body is very pedo, so its nice seeing an older looking Hinata with the nice hair. (B
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EvilDaveCanada Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008
Drooolllll !!!!!!!
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:iconzoe0shockwave0:
Zoe0Shockwave0 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
Man this pic is DAMN good. 10/10.
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:iconzanity-ytinaz:
Zanity-ytinaz Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2008
Sexy :3
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:icondengekimatsuko:
DengekiMatsuko Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Meh. I liked the old one better
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:iconlogan890:
logan890 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008
Great pic, Hinata never looked better.
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:icontheandrogyne:
TheAndrogyne Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Sexy. I like it.
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:iconshadow-hostage:
shadow-hostage Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the way you drew her hair. The snow is really pretty too.
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:iconrustyrayz:
rustyrayz Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007  Hobbyist
all right!!!
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:iconmexicandrugdealer:
Mexicandrugdealer Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
HHHHoo... ooooth ... hotie... Hoooot... Hotie
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:iconvicarus:
Vicarus Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2007
Awsome o_O

Love ^^
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:iconwolfpackmac:
WolfPackMac Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2007
Very nice automatic fav
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:iconkaijuduke:
KaijuDuke Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2007
very sexy! i love how you have her blushing despite being bold enough to wear such a revealing suit (in the snow, no less, lol). Its colored well and the backgrounds beautiful! nice work!
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:iconnagneto:
Nagneto Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Loving it....I feel dirty for some reason. VERY VERY well drawn. Words cant describe the awesomeness.
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:iconsvartsippa:
svartsippa Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007
i usually haaate it when people make hinata all porned up but this is really cute <3 lovely artwork -favs- : D
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:iconshay-kun:
Shay-kun Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2007
I love it. But tell me...WHY is she out in the snow in a bathing suit? The world may never know.
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:iconmatch25:
Match25 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2007
if she dressed like that Naruto wouldnt keep his eyes off her
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:iconsithhunter:
sithhunter Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2007
.........wow.......again
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:iconshinobidragonmaster:
shinobidragonmaster Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007
Very well drawn! Captures Hinata's beauty perfectly! :+fav:
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:iconacidalium:
Acidalium Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2007
wootburgers, nice pic, verywell done. kudos
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darthshade245 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
i watched that film last night it rocks,oh and sexy pic jadeedge
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:iconcuriodarkon:
CurioDarkon Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007
My first official favourited image...
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:iconcody119:
cody119 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2007
sexy!
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:iconmangaviciada23:
mangaviciada23 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2007  Student
OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH
i wish i could draw like that...
but some day i will be capable of!!!!
i love it, very much
if you like, coment one of my draws please.
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:iconmayritita:
mayritita Featured By Owner May 30, 2007
you improved that is for sure!
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:iconfuzzyleprechaun:
FuzzyLeprechaun Featured By Owner May 29, 2007
I like this one better than your post. The colors on this one are more intensified and she isn't directly flirting, but seems much more shy at her appearance (or whatever she's looking at).

Kudos to you.
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xy2kura Featured By Owner May 29, 2007
I kinda like this original. Both the new and the old look good but clearly there is a atmosphere difference. In this one, she looks rather depressed and the other makes her seem like she's flirty and an ice princess.
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AliceLynx Featured By Owner May 29, 2007
I prefer this picture before the newer version.
I don't see a lot wrong with the picture, so you should be fine from my wrath.
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Rexen2 Featured By Owner May 29, 2007   Photographer
is that hinata? o.O
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EuphoricBlue Featured By Owner May 29, 2007
I don't know if anyone else noticed but, you didn't actually redraw the whole picture.

Yes, you redrew the background, the hair, and the face. But the only thing you did to the body was trace the lines while rounding out the bust/buttocks and abs.

If the rest of your drawing has improved as much as your coloring has, I'm willing to bet this picture would look even better if fully redrawn.

I think you should used the old drawing as a concept drawing and starting everything else from scratch (new sketch/new line-art/new colors/and new background). The reason for this is that you get to see overall progress not just progress in a couple areas. I'm sure if you redrew it completely the pose would change slightly and probably look more natural.

Just my .02
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jadeedge Featured By Owner May 29, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
i know i didn't "re-draw" the whole thing... that was the point. :p
i wanted to keep the drawing as close to the original as possible to show overall improvement with color and technique. i'd love to re-do the whole thing 100%, but i'm probably not going to anytime soon ^^;

thanx for the critique though :D
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EuphoricBlue Featured By Owner May 29, 2007
Woops, wrong picture... How do I delete this? >_>
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EuphoricBlue Featured By Owner May 29, 2007
Comment was meant for [link]
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:iconmontecristohakushaku:
Whoa! Sexy!
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:iconkorosu-sama:
Korosu-sama Featured By Owner May 29, 2007
I like the tones you used on the skin more here than the other, but the redo looks more masterful and the art in the new one seems less.. cluttered.. both pieces are great tho XD
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Kapalsky Featured By Owner May 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
What the?...
Hey, I must say she looks attractive...as always but here it's kinda special!...
Nice...nice draw.
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AkureiSpartan117 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2007
She mus be pretty damn cold! lol. great picture anyway!
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:iconlyoko2121:
Lyoko2121 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
HFS!!!!!!!! ::nose bleed::
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PAXthe4Th Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2007
sexy!
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SniperJedi Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2007
How she manages to work up the blood to blush, in this weather, is beyond me. But i'm glad she did! She's so cute when she blushes.
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I-luv-Moony Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
Personally Hinata's the most beautiful girl in the group :)
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:icontrianglon:
Trianglon Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2007  Student Filmographer
Wow!!!!
You're good!!!
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:iconfreeza-frost:
freeza-frost Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow! so you drew this? saw this at aerisdies.com!
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:iconhubball666:
hubball666 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2007
nice one, great snow fall, shading, colouring, personality, and a beautiful Hinata to, well done
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:iconkfuchoin:
kfuchoin Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2007   Interface Designer
omg ou made hinata so serxy.. but the face dosen't looks like hers... and i bet that there is coldy o.o
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:icondmasterman:
Dmasterman Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2007
she looks so cold...I'd love to warm her up!
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Golem-of-fire Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2007
The detail is really good, the snow fall is beautiful. By far this is the sexiest pic of Hinata that i have seen.
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aalix07 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2007
this is great, i always knew hinata was a hottie under that coat of hers lol
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