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By Jade-Pandora
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The moment I saw you I was already
calculating the space you fill algebraically,

doing the dimensional analysis
both awake and in my sleep

until, over the arc of our tenure as lovers,
I accepted the mathematical sums,

and it continues to elevate and meander
by cranial orbits and biological chemistry.

You defy physics for why it's this way, and
being together creating another chemical reaction

when it comes to how I mirror you, turning into
windows to cross over and meld into 3D.

I stumbled on a new group where the members have been playing out an experiment this month of April as a kind of NaPoWriMo, called NaPoGliiMo.  I was instantly intrigued because of the edgy entries from the ones in the group who are participating.  Stay tuned to see if I can run with the pack, even if I do it with a limp. (update: I made it all the way!)

The rule of thumb for interpreting the themes if you're going to do a piece for the group, there really is no rule.  They tell everyone to go with how you, the writer, interprets them.  And I say that goes for the readers, too.  So, reflecting how deep my Gaelic heritage goes in me, I've dedicated this piece with one of the gliitchmonth's group themes for April: "your dimension suits me".

:iconnapowrimo: 8th Day

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An experimental, mathematical relationship.
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I absolutely love this
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Aww gosh, many thanks.
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a very finely tuned piece, Jade.

:) pip
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Why thank you kindly, dear pip! :iconbowplz:
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Keep writing and keep creating.

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This was such a wonderful surprise -- thank you ever so! :faint:
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:glomp: Doriannnn! Thank you for stopping by, I've missed seeing you! :heart:

I'm so glad you embrace this piece, and I've been writing SO much this month as part of an experimental challenge throughout April.  It's pushed me to be able to write and post all manner of subjects.  If you want to keep track of which ones, I've set up a folder in my gallery "Gliitchmonth collection; April 2015" where they are all listed with the newest at the top.  In fact, I posted my 15th one mere minutes ago.  I'm have quite a time participating.  Meantime, thoughts of you & yours, dear.  Please know I often think of you, wondering how all is going.  You take care, and thank you for the fave! :love:
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sharing this with my lover because yes science = love
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I really love when poetry like this crops up. Because I'm such a mathematical/scientific person by nature this really speaks to me. :love:
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That's about the loveliest compliment you could pay me regarding this poem, and the way you think of how I applied the theory to a relationship, Jade.  Thank you so very much. :blowkiss: remake 
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You are absolutely welcome dear. Thank you for writing such a fabulous piece. :hug: 
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Interesting... in a good way! It makes you think and that is always good.
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I'm glad you think so, thank you. :nod:
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it is really cool :D
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:excited: Really?  Thank you, Faeri!
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yeah really! and thanks for the LLama ;)
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:bow: You're very welcome.
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:D nice profile picture
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