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Time Gone By

Singing and chanting in the rain,

Dancing away what seemed like endless days.
Not such a care in the world except playing with each other.

Hot summer days we melted away.
Sitting side by side in the sun,
Eating slices of watermelon before the day was done.

Autumn colors meet our eyes,
The summer sun now starts to die.
Chilly weather will come soon,
But I have this scarf from you.

Will snow fall this year?
The answer is never clear,
But we thought we would always be bundled together.
Sipping our hot cocoa and marshmallows.

Time has gone so fast,
What happen to those close knit kids?
That's right we're all grown up,
But nothing much has changed.

May the different moments of life come,
Through it all we may go as long as we have each other.
Cause grown up we may be,
We still love another even if it may be a little different now.

This is :iconshelselle: and I entry for the :iconanniverse: Poem event! 
A poem relating to her two precious OC's Leon and Penny
Hope you like it and enjoy
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Ethii Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
EEEEEEEEP I NEVER GOT ROUND TO COMPLIMENTING THIS PIECE
I adoreeeee the fact that you guys wrote several paragraphs to show the seasons passing ~~
And the fact that, despite all this time their love is eternal T v T //weeps 
Very short and sweet, good work the both of you ♥ 

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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Gosh I'm so late to replying! I'm so glad you enjoyed it ~ You're such a sweetheart and yes their love will be eternal fufu!! Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] 

We need to pressure Shel for more information on them hue hue (jkjk) Blue Heart Icon 
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kittengeist Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how time seems to pass in this one, it was really well portrayed with the added emotions!
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2018  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think the passing of time is kinda necessary for these two XD they're just so sweet characters that are so close. Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] 

Also I'm happy you think it was portrayed well! You're too kind Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Senpai notice me) [V3] Blue Heart Icon 
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HanazonoLylian Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2018
i love the poem, this one have strong feelings and you can feel this bittersweet emotion too uvu

i want to know more about this pair ;3;
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Ah bittersweet is one of my favorite things to do XD Im glad you enjoyed it though!
Also all the love from Leon and Penny!!! They such cute kids Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] 
I agree with you that we need more information about them haha, Shel needs to let us know more Lovely Shoujo (Err Drawing Blank) [V3] Blue Heart Icon 
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sealartonline Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You can really feel the motion of time passing with every stanza! I love how ti starts light hearted but ends in a melancholic way~
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Ah i'm glad you enjoyed it! I mean I dont know too much about Leon and Penny, but I kinda imagined they grew up together and eventually became a couple one day.
But it is kinda melancholic as you say XD Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] 
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Elxyiee Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2018
Leon and Penny!!!!!!!!!! ;A; 

I love the way you write all four seasons without having especially indicated them!
Just by the change in the tone and words, you can tell that it's a new season and I love that ;v;

Short, simple but sweet!! Aaaa thank you for this lovely poem Jade and Shel 
 
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Ah Elxy!!! You sweetheart, I'm glad you enjoyed it and also you think its not too obvious? (the seasons) XD 

Also bless your heart for including Shel XD she helped so much on this Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Senpai notice me) [V3] Pink Heart Icon  
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AJRoanoke Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how the tone shifts with the season. Its very bitter sweet. Good job
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it [Cat Emote] Closed Eye Smile also I love how you describe it! (i love the word bittersweet lol) 
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AJRoanoke Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome <3
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121GWJolt Featured By Owner Edited Jun 24, 2018
I love this a lot! It's got such strong emotions in it! Makes me curious to learn more about these two. Hope you can release more material on them at some point!
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Jolt! You sweetheart, thank you so much. [Cat Emote] Crying Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Senpai notice me) [V3] You work so hard and are so passionate, I admire you being so sweet and taking your time to do this!!! Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Huggy heart) [V6]  
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RiversReverie Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful~ It has a sweet and nostalgic feel. Heart 
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much~ I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] 
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tippisuu Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2018
[-ai- ROMANCE] Light Pink Heart Bullet by Gasara asdfghjk jaaaaaay TT/////TT
i'm always a sucker for your poems!!
i really love the relationship between leon and penny already
but the words you and shel have written are so inspiring
i hope to one day read a more in depth story of them! :heart:
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Ahhh Thank you so much Char, my sugar blossom [Bunny Emote] Tears Of Joy 
I hope to see more of them too lol, Shel needs to us more content XD
but Shel really helped me with writing this. I'm so grateful to have been able to collab with her 

Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2] 
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chaosheart13 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2018
Awww, this was cute, I enjoyed it!
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Jade-Hearts-Art Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Ah thank you so much. Im glad you enjoyed it Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2] 
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