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Daily Deviation
June 24, 2021
Connection by jackrough
Featured by Barosus
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Literature Text

Hungrier I am for love

less interested I become

with the trails you set

in sparkly crumbs.

Give me



intention backed action.

Nothing to hide.

Nothing to tolerate.

Tell me.

You crave my expansion?

I create from acceptance.

I create in vast open spaces.

In this box

I decay

into carrion.

When sensitivity is a curse;

what happens to pain?

What of all those times

we stood up howling;

fell asleep weeping?

What happens to joy;

when tears are scorned?

Or else weaponized;

minimised or dramatized?

I want to reform as soft

despite the prickly world.

My own spikes -

always in the way.

See the exhaustion;

from wishing so hard

through rain and shine

for deep connection.

Hear the the trials and errors endured

away from the safe folds of solitude.

Have mercy; I am trying.

Lead me always

again to my tribe.

2021 Helsinki
© 2021 jackrough
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raido-ehwaz's avatar

This is beautiful, and worth reading several times (as with all good poetry).

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Thank you. 💜

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Elendurwen's avatar

I think I understand you.. I also feel too sensitive to the world and to the people, unable to make a connection at a deep level because most people to me seem like they are selfish and want to take advantage. An ego-less connection - does it truly exist?

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It might not exist yet, but we are good at making our dreams come true. 💜

LindArtz's avatar

Nice work!!! :) A belated congrats on your much Deserved, DD!!! :clap:

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alapip's avatar

A DD! Yes! Congratulations, Jack. :) pip

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Your doing, I assume? 💜

Thank you, Pip.

Ryuzuki98's avatar

This is beautiful! The feeling oozes from this one! Congrats on the DD!

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You don't seem to post often, Jack,

but when you do, it's generally

excellent, like this one. :) pip

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