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General Dear DeviantArt users. I'm currently working on the scripts for my stories so that one day I can draw a graphic novel for them. Lizard Life is going to be a really weird story with lots of bizarre situations the characters will get into - both men and women. So I want to ask you if the ideas I have don't go too far. Because there is this one chapter where the women, who are already outnumbered as Lizard Life is a more male-dominated story, don't really get off well. Women under hypnotic control In this chapter, Samba's old archenemies, lead by Hortens, a British ground hornbill, managed to take over his hometown. They have captured the citizens and are extorting protection money from them. They also captured and hypnotically controlled the three women of Lizard Life, Jazz, Samba's tomboyish sister, Jamala, Tomombo Joe's big sister, and Brooke, Tomombo Joe's and Jamala's white cousin. The villains gave the three women revealing robes and treated them like maids. The three