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V for vendeta fan comic: If I were Evie by Izzi1313 V for vendeta fan comic: If I were Evie by Izzi1313
"Remember remember the fifth of November
Gunpowder, treason and plot.
I know of no reason why gunpowder, treason
Should ever be forgotů"

Read right to left!

Haha i remembered the wrong day originally, haven't seen the movie in so long, thought it was the 4th of Nov.

I decided to make a fan comic 'cause i enjoyed this movie so much.. of course i procrastinated until the last minute, wasn't able to finish it until after midnight.. so i guess now at 1:22 AM Nov. 5th officially.. so i hope i remebered it well enough!
Thought doing a "What if I were in Evie's shoes?" so don't forget to look at the Evie shoes, i would never in real life wear anything like them!

oh and the brik wall was done by computer..
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Obelis Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Fans meeting the person they admire really can be annoying sometimes. :XD:
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Hobbyist
:nod:
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehehe this was funny again. :XD: 
WHY :XD:

And also I'm impressed on this that people actually commented on this AFTER ME! It was a long time ago- like it should have been, and I've just messed it up just now :XD: but it's nice to see all the exchanges from others here, and not just me. :)
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist
Funny I was just looking at it again recently-ish :D and feeling this -> :ashamed: :nod: 
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analillithbar Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know if you are aware of it, but V for Vendetta was originally a graphic novel: [link] <- This is just the wiki link, but you can google the series. Stay inspired. And, thanks for the link.
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist
Yeah i knew, never read it, but someone told me before..
You're welcome! and thank You for the intrest!
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analillithbar Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have not read the graphic novel either, but I do own the movie. :D
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist
uh huh..
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lol
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analillithbar Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconvendettaplz:
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist
:iconsobeautifulplz:
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analillithbar Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:wave:
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noobyzgir350 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Student General Artist
love this
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank you very much!! Oh and so i won't fill your profile page with unwanted comments thanx for the :+fav: as well!!
I was wondering, how'd you find this comic anyways?
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noobyzgir350 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Student General Artist
funny at the end when v was poking the guy he killed lol
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Oh right haha.. Thanx..
Though that wasn't my question, i was actually wondering where did you first see the comic.. it's kinda old.. and i don't remember putting it in any groups..
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noobyzgir350 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Student General Artist
hmm...no...
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Oh well thanx anyways,
sorry for the trouble!
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noobyzgir350 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Student General Artist
it was no trouble and your welcome!
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist
:iconhandsomeonionplz:
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LilyHellsing Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
Hahahaha xDDD Loved it
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist
Thanx alot!
Oh and thanx so much for the :+fav:!!!
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valued-vestige Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can totally see that happening! *laughs* Yes, it would happen just like that. "Fan gurl, you say? Well, yes, you can come with me. You'll have to wear this I'm afraid." *puts blind fold on unsuspecting fan* ... "This way." *They walk to the left, V melts into the shadows on the right, never to be seen by them again.*
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist
Haha that would be funny! And imginitive!
Thanx for the comment!
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Dodger3742 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist
The whole thing loosely based on Guy Fawkes and his followers who attempted to take out the House of Lords with a huge store of gun powder.

Cool you find this interesting. We just had our Guy Fawkes night on the 5th....fireworks ect.

V...5...5th.....Mask is supposed to look like Guy Fawkes.

I am decended from one of the conspirators, Thomas Piercy or Percy depending on which history we follow...:)
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist
You mean the movie right? i mean, that's what this fan comic is about.. glad you liked it anyways..
thanx for the comment!
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Dodger3742 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist
Oh yes, the movie. It is actually one of my favorites...
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist
Me too!
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toziren Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is cute lol
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist
Haha thanx!!!
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay last thing. I love the way you drew Mr. V. Best looking male drawing I think I've seen you do. I love it.
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist
[link]
a randome picture of V on DA just so you can know how he looks like when not drawn by me..
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is he supposed to be a masked character, or is that a cosplay mask. The way you drew him it looked like he had a natural face, and very well drawn at that.
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist
Haha, no not cosplay, V wears a mask, figured you thought that that was his face, so i found that picture for you.. check out the youtube link i gave you, you'll get a good feel of what V and the movie is about.
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Here's what I thought about each panel of this.
In the fighting panel with the words I was thinking. "Are they really fighting?" and I was thinking about weapons & attacks being used just briefly. Speaking of brief, it made me remember what a comic fight is normally supposed to "look like". Not 6 pages long like a Todd & The Shining Swordfight.
The tall panel I was thinking. Okay, did she just lose a fight or only get beat up? Or not? Is this even the second panel? I know I do people pretty wrong with my crazy panel order in some of my comics, but... and I looked for little arrows, didn't see any, and then went on, feeling like I was reading everything in the right order 'cause it was making good sense.
Then in the panel where you are on the ground, well I just viewed that all wrong. The second time I looked at it after I finished reading everything I saw what is actually going on in that panel. The first time I looked, though, was like this:
Okay. So you're down in the alley in that little dress. Okay, where your knees are... I thought those were your hips, and I thought the lower half of your leg that was showing, I thought that was your thigh and your shoe was your gloves. o.O
I was like What in the world is Izzi drawing!? Why is she showing her butt cheeks, and what the hell is going on in this alley!? And what's up with this drawing? Didn't I tell her about drawing weird bodies? I think if you just look at that panel, and look from your shoulder to your knees in it you'll realize the distorted body I thought I was seeing!
It was great when Mr V started talking. You blew me away with your use of letter V vocabulary! How did you come up with all those words. He helped you, right? You already knew the stuff he would say?
I'm gonna finish my comment as another comment, because I'm actually busy right now.
I know. Weird, right?
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist
Haha sorry 'bout not putting any arrows, i realized when planing it that it would be hard to figure out, but not that hard..
about the third pannle, where i first apear.. do you believe my mother thought the same thing? well similer thing.. after i was done explaining what was going on in the page and about to walk away she said, "you know i thought that her knees were her butt?" i thought that was weird, i'll stare at that page for a long time trying to figure out why that's happening..

I know it's probably hard to understand, but this was made by someone who watched the movie, for people who watched the movie.. so they know what went on and what is going on.. and where i'm changing sthings.. so they're less likely to get this confused...

The V vocabulary is all his.. i made myself interrupt him with his own speech to give the image of a total fan girl.. i just copied it off the quotes on the internet..

It's just a shame you don't already know the movie.. but thanx for taking interest anyways..
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The page wasn't that had to figure out, but a small arrow or two would have clarified it.
I think as far as people looking at you weird in this comic, I think how it happens is it starts with the pose and ends with your shoe. I think when people see a pose by default they think the side of the character's back is the back all the way up and down, but in this picture, you're twisted around, so your back is turned to face your knees, and I think the picture would need then to be nice and clear so people know that the back of your torso is facing the front of your legs. So that goes to the shoes. I thought they were gloves. I mean, they do look like shoes, but with them being in front of your hands like that it's not instantly clear to the eye that those are shoes and not something else, and it was important they be very clearly shoes because you're in a position the viewer doesn't see every day and isn't really prepared for. The other thing you could have done was add more detail to the lower leg. Just enough to make it clear that's a calf and a shin and a knee, and not hips and thighs! I remember you saying on that pic I traced that legs with no detail on the knee look funny to you or something like that. Well, the pose here looks a little funny without that.
I really like your pose, but it did take me two good looks to figure it out.
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really wasn't feeling confused by anything there except the panel where your body looks weird. I got the idea from the beginning that this comic was by and for people who had seen the movie. I know I put references like that in comics I make. Ah! That's the word I was looking for! Fangirl! That's why I couldn't type my comment properly! I knew I was missing an important word (plus lots of words that start with V)! You did the fangirl image perfectly! Are you a Mr V fangirl in real life like this? Copying quotes huh? Good job doing that! I haven't seen just copying everything and throwing it together ever work recently as well as it did here when you just did it, and fangirl Izzi is adorable.
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist
Oh okay that's good..
Haha well i never thought as them as refrences.. more like, i changed a scene and put it there..

Haha no, not a fangirl, but sure would be funny if i were.. i couldn't learn what he said even if my life depended on it! but that's one of my favorite parts in the movie..
Thanx!

one second, just 'cause i'm bored i'm going to give you a link to the scene.. so if you feel bored too feel free to check it out so you can understand what's going on..
[link] 4:24
Haven't seen it in so long, forgot howmany villans there were..
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I finally watched the video. Man, that was some thick language Mr. V was using. I understood that vengeance would vindicate the virtuous, but most of the rest of what he said... Wow.
Those secret police bad guys sure were bad. They said if by sunup she wasn't the sorriest ass in all of London, she sure would be the sorest! Ouch.
In order to be his fangirl you would not only have had to memorize what he said, you would have to learn what all those intense words mean too.
And now I understand the first panel. He was fighting the rapists.
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist
Hahah but i don't understand most of it! i did watch another one that is called " V's speech in words we can finally understand" it's subbed with the main idea of what he's saying but in a funny manner..

Well, i hope it helped you understand where the comic was coming from..
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I would have understood more of it if he'd talked slower. Those words were all so big I needed him to say them one sentence at a time, but he kept talking with them!
Now that I've seen that scene I understand the whole comic now, but it should be clearer at the end that he's poking a bad guy that's down, because I couldn't really make out the downed man's body...
But I would not have wanted to see that ending! I would not have wanted to see you get punished in London like that!
Hey, maybe you could put the link to the YouTube video in the description for anyone who doesn't get it.
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist
Yeah well that's what happens when i rush.. I was supposed to draw the guy curled up and the ground, and more of V's body.. but it wasn't turning out right, so when i got a good pose for V, i didn't feel like earasing it to make more room for the bad guy's body, and i didn't have enough time.. but i tried to make it clear by the poking, and the diolog.. though i struggled with that, 'cause i though, "what is V suppose to adress a bad dead fingerman with?" i ended up putting 'Sir'..

Haha i realized that.. but the first time i saw the movie i was 15.. i didn't understand it that well, rape didn't accure to me.. i just thought they'd take her off to the fingermen layer beat her up and then kill her... and that would've made sense because that's the kind of force they were... later on i got it, but everytime i think about it, i remember what i understood (or rather misunderstood) the first time.. so i left it that way...

yeah i was thinking of doing that..
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay. I'm back now. Now I can finish. This is one of the reasons I end up drawing on Tuesday and posting then for viewing Wednesday. I'm not too busy to draw, but Friday-Monday I'm kind of busy with other stuff too much.
Okay. Lower half of the page. Less wild thoughts than the top half.

I love the panel where you start talking. It's like two pages of talking in one panel so you don't have to make 2 pages. It could look wordy, but that's fine because your comics on here are pretty short on words. In fact, it's great, because it's only that panel and one more, and it lets people get the picture that you're talking too much, and it's all fun to read and it really isn't wordy. It's great. Just like your thrilled face. I like how your pupils are like dilated or something so they and the irises fill the whole eye and you're blushing off of your face. :) Nice hands too. They might look a little weird maybe, but I like them and think they're nice. And then in the next panel where you're begging to to his lair. That's funny. I wish I had thought of that! Coming up with that stuff to say while you beg him. Why do I feel like I learned something new about begging today. lol. You looked good there against those digital bricks in the background and Mr V. in the foreground.

One problem you do have is you crowd your word balloons. I heard from some guy who gives advice on comics that that's about the most common mistake he sees. It was good to do that in the first 2 panels where you're talking- it makes everything more texty to help people get that you're talking too much- but not the next to last one. You should have at least put the sweatdrop on the other side, but the ellipsis dot group is on that side, and maybe they should not both have been on one side. Maybe. I didn't notice those 3 dots at first. I bet you wanted to keep the sweatdrop cleanly out of the way of his face. I started thinking about what I would do in that next to last panel. First of all, it looks like you made 2 mistakes that I made. One that I learned to overcome and one that just caught me in a panel I just drew. You misjudged how much space text takes and/or didn't plan for it, and it looks like you did not draw the characters in the correct part of the panel, and then by the time you realized that you would have had to start it all over and didn't have the time. I just drew a panel like that, but for the first time in a long time I opted to move the male and the female by erasing everything and starting over on it. And speaking of male and female and my comic, this reminds me a lot of the stuff I drew on Pages 6 & 7 of my comic. (Haven't uploaded that yet. Not enough is finished for it to all make proper sense like I want.) Are you still on your knees at that point, just getting up, or is Mr V also tall? I know you already told me you were pretty short. Then I saw that old pic of the boy and his mom, lol. What I would have done was get rid of space between this panel and the final one so there'd be more room in there. I'm sure you wanted all the panels evenly spaced, but that would have been good. I also love what you did with your hair there, even though it wasn't that special, so it's good there were hearts all around your head 'cause I loved it. That's something I will want to use as a reference in the near future. Pretty and simple. :) <3:heart:

Last panel. I always loved it when you'd draw yourself with a character and be standing there lost like that. The joke is funny and you're looking so special standing there left alone like that with nothing but your question mark. :3 The bricks are slanted relative to the ground, and they're shown with the ground, unlike the other panels so they don't look as good in the very last panel as in the 2 panels before that. Can you explain your expression in the final panel to me though. I downloaded the pic, and I'm still not sure, but I think you're standing there still blushing, and with your mouth open? Also, what is Mr. V doing exactly?
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist
huh that's weird, i never actually read this comment.. i read the comment above it, and the comment below it.. but this one never turned out in my reply stack, that's really odd..

Haha well, i thought that if i put all the talking in one pannle, it would make people read it faster, no pauses, just going on and on and on.. the expression is basically:
:iconawwwplz: or :icondeyedplz: or :iconilltellonyouplz:
I'm not all that good with word bubbles, mostly 'cause i decided to change thins at the last moment.. so maybe i decided to change the size of the text while inking, but then didn't have that much room.. i don't know..

On the last panel, well, the wall looks crooked 'cause the ground is.. that happens to me often, had i noticed i would've slanted the wall a bit so it would still look straight..
my expression:
:iconpetrifiedplz: or :iconshockplz: or :iconomgwtfbbqplz:
And V is poke pokeing the bad guy, telling him that he changed his mind..
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's actually not that weird that this didn't appear in your Reply Stack. When I hit the Add Comment button nothing happened. Then I got a message box saying "No valid response received", but then I looked at your page and saw it was on there, so I thought it was okay. That would explain why you didn't get it in your messages.
What I learned to do with word bubbles is pencil everything in them first to ensure it all fits, then check the size of it. Ink it, but if you need to change the size, do it carefully as you go along. That's what I do.
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist
Oh that explains it, it happens quite alot with me..

Ah well, i try to do that, i have everything complete in penicl.. then at the really last moment as i'm inking it i change my mind and ruin everything usually.. i try not to do that.. but i still do..
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You'll see that that still happens to me when you see my pages I'm working on now. I keep having to correct things with glue and tape and paper because I already inked the text messed up.
I found a notebook full of old OCs yesterday, so I'll be posting that all over Tuesday while I work on finishing my comic pages.
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist
huh well, i hope i'll get over that problem..
haha can't wait to see!
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was going through my Messages
delete delete delete- Oh!
Deleted something new by you, so I came by to look at it.
I don't really know Mr V or the movie you're referring to.
Heheh. Mr V could have been a Sesame Street character, except his vocabulary is way too big for the little kids! In fact, it's too big for me, because I can't think of any words that start with V that I can use to describe this!
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Izzi1313 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist
Hahah and that was just the beginning of what he said.. aside from that, what did you think of the page as a whole? i spent most of the time on the drawings, still wasn't satisfied, but was running out of time.. then totally rushed the shading.. so i was wondering how you thought it looks?
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